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為慶祝本創挑開辦逾一年,我們決定舉行一周年特殊企劃!走過路過別錯過!
每個人,都在尋找生命的另一半……
每個讀者,都在尋找閱讀的另一半……
你,就是我命中注定要為你獻出❤得的作者嗎?
周年特殊企劃
1. 參考創挑 #1 狩書魔介紹,在文章標題加上一位你想指名的狩書魔(必須是 #1 文中有列出的成員)。標題參考範例:《XXX》(指名:凝雨)
2. 3/22的抽獎結束後,狩書魔們會從未中獎的作品中,選一部指名自己的作品寫心得。閱讀章節數不限,心得字數為 1000 字以上,同樣於 3/23 至 4/7 間上傳至創挑頁面。
3. 注意⚠️不指名視為不參加特殊企劃!有指名才能獲得雙倍機率!
即日起,只要在本創挑中宣傳,就有機會得到讀書會成員「狩書魔」的千字心得回饋!我們是專門狩獵好書的魔狼🐺
我們的成員包含:QRS、王斯洛、生若虎、阿雀、青小豆、挪拉夫、海貍、鬼才、魚落井、黑正、鈴鈴卷、綠木柚子、蓮蓮、凝雨、謎樣烏鴉(按照首字筆畫排序)。
感謝大家的參與,讓先前的活動順利落幕!以下為前三屆活動:
【第五屆】https://www.penana.com/story/133999
【第六屆】https://www.penana.com/story/136442
【第七屆】https://www.penana.com/story/147097
另有專門收錄本創挑心得的共同作品,也歡迎大家移步看看:
https://www.penana.com/story/124959
關於本次宣傳投稿規則、時程及心得撰寫原則,請詳見下方說明👇
一、投稿時間:
即刻起至3/22(五)21:00
二、投稿注意事項:
1. 每人在本次創挑中只能投稿 1 部作品。
2. 作品總字數必須大於三萬字。
3. 請在內文中寫下 100 至 500 字的介紹。
4. 可能會出現負面的心得,玻璃心的作者請勿參加。
5. 日誌、詩集及評文仍可投稿,但會被排除於抽獎名單中。
6. 廣東話、同人作品請經過審慎考慮再投稿,前者是因為狩書魔成員中只有幾位能看懂廣東話,不利於撰寫心得;後者是由於成員不一定看過原作品,因此可能無法提供深入的心得。
7. 3/22(五)21:00 到創挑結束前仍然可以投稿,但是沒有機會得到心得回饋,只有宣傳效果。
8. 每五屆歸零一次!所以若投稿前五屆(第一至第五屆)中獎的作品,這次仍然會被放進抽獎名單中!如果你很好運地中獎第二次,一樣是閱讀前十章,但是將會由與前次不同的狩書魔給予心得!
三、時程:
3/22(五)23:00,我們將從投稿的作品中隨機抽出 10 部,每部作品將獲得 1 名狩書魔的心得,於 3/23 至 4/7 間上傳至創挑頁面。
四、閱讀及心得撰寫原則:
1. 狩書魔成員以閱讀前 10 章為原則,總字數不超過兩萬字。若前 10 章超過兩萬字,則成員會自行減少閱讀的章節數。
2. 每篇心得回饋的字數為 1000 字以上,以 Penana 字數為準。
3. 寫好的心得將會發布在創挑中,並於留言區 @ 該位作者前來觀看。
五、賞金、名次及徽章分配:
1. 由於參酌狩書魔需費心思閱讀及撰寫心得,因此徽章將以抽籤方式頒發給名撰寫心得的成員。
2. 賞金由所有人平分。
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我只是怕 Penana 吃通知令你根本不知道我回覆了XD
(FB 很常吃通知啊)
我反而感到你在盡可能用和平的語氣講述事實,以致於想被鞭的我有點小失落XD
關於懷亞特:
應該不會便當,他是留著虐的(無誤)
關於懷亞特的智商:
有一部份是伏筆(受某種力量的影響,第一部後面會帶到),另一部份是我的疏失(跪)。
我在修文的時候有感覺到問題,但前半段的劇情一旦要改就會影響到後面。為了不讓修文綿延無期只好讓前半段保持這樣QwQ
關於宗教:
這個世界的神靈彼此對信徒的態度都不同。有會積極響應的,也有愛理不理,甚至完全不會回應的都有。資訊不明確是希望讓讀者有慢慢發掘的樂趣,因為我個人很喜歡XD
我會再拿捏一下平衡。
關於樹枝的神靈:
是第一章裡懷亞特呼喊的「親愛的老伊卡」。這裡是刻意用一個不那麼高貴、有親和力的名號,好表現出老伊卡的特殊之處。
謝謝你喜歡肖恩,第二部他會有更多戲份!
關於格雷:
他喜歡魔獸的理由會牽涉到這個故事的核心,所以是刻意不講清楚。簡單說是因為喜歡魔法所以連帶喜歡魔獸。而魔獸與魔法的關係是個很大的伏筆。討厭女神的理由也是。
以格雷個人視角出發的敘述,會因為他本人不想回憶所以不會帶到。
(感覺我被角色牽著鼻子走了QQ)
關於世界觀:
真的很不清楚,對不起XD
感覺像是找藉口,但這裡又是我個人愛好的鍋,因為我超喜歡一點一點剝開迷霧的感覺。為了往後的讀者著想,我會試著調整提供資訊的部份。
關於打戲:
我超不會寫打戲,你看到的已經是我目前的極限了QQ
關於劇情&表達:
一開始的節奏真的是很慢。誠如你所說,因為太多細節不知道要怎麼取捨,才會導致塞了一堆東西,讓章節超乎預期的長……
我正試著在第二部改善這點,但這有點像是要把習慣的寫法打掉重練。很痛苦,但必須得做_(´ཀ`」 ∠)_
不知不覺我也打了落落長一大段,權作回應你的超詳盡心得XD
各方面都獲益良多,非常感謝烏鴉選擇我的故事!