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恕我無禮,這個故事我真的看不下去
ENTRY #16
心累……
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光看簡介就不知道在寫什麼,一點都勾引不起興趣,除非耐下性子習慣一下才行。315Please respect copyright.PENANAIoS0u2O41r
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標籤貼史詩,嗯,好像一點都沒有感覺呢!整體看來大概就前面鋪陳太久,光看過場設定的文字大概就飽了,我真的要多多唸經才行呢!8964 copyright protection311PENANAhpyHAx20gy 維尼
雖然感覺作者想要埋一些伏筆,但看到後面真的會忘記填坑的期待感。315Please respect copyright.PENANAIYTpl0gpbV
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優點:大概還算能理解的文字,交代的還算清楚。8964 copyright protection311PENANArrXbyhRdnq 維尼
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