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一句說話說出作者們希望讀者的回報！者
ENTRY #2
Author: 凪ノ日常
Published:
Nov 13, 2016
一句說話說出作者們希望讀者的回報！者
Published:
Nov 13, 2016
ENTRY #2
希望讀者大力指出缺點
Author: 凪ノ日常
Published:
Nov 13, 2016
1 Min Read
93 Words
No Plagiarism!bdVgEiyASnghfgzIX2smposted on PＥNAＮＡ   一直以來總覺得我的文章寫的很糟糕，角色性格常常互相顛倒或是忘記，但剛打完的時候只會覺得自己寫的很完美，然後……一直這樣文筆也不會有所進步。

  所以希望可以有心智強大到能看完我的文章的讀者多多指出我的缺失

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