【冰漾】我的單身日記 第二十章55Please respect copyright.PENANA80wbqp62Qa
發文時間: 4/24 2012
發文時間: 4/24 2012
我的單身日記 2055Please respect copyright.PENANAArP02tXoXv
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『在幻族任務中突破重圍,褚冥漾等人漂亮的淨化了怨靈大軍。但由幻族人消失的原因更深入調查後,發現其緣由竟與鬼王高手有所關聯!公會史上最大規模的搜查任務如火如荼的展開!而褚冥漾坎坷的戀愛之路又會如何發展呢?驚奇不斷的最新劇情,一切盡在《我的單身日記》!』55Please respect copyright.PENANA0OyojsbK0e
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『……米納斯,我可以問一下,妳到底都看了些什麼電視嗎?』55Please respect copyright.PENANA7fZI1NwCah
55Please respect copyright.PENANAPYornP4jjC
『主人,其實我並沒有看電視。』55Please respect copyright.PENANARKFnQnk8uo
55Please respect copyright.PENANA0L0kQuCbYM
『那為什麼妳最近變的這麼奇怪?』55Please respect copyright.PENANAwgmilaWAyB
55Please respect copyright.PENANAuLCrbrLfYh
『因為我看的是您的日記啊,主人。』55Please respect copyright.PENANAmEzaonEZfp
55Please respect copyright.PENANAoQmLtdXOad
『……原來是我的錯嗎!?』55Please respect copyright.PENANAIJ7XJFgkL8
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***55Please respect copyright.PENANAbX3BaeBsBe
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在幻族領地裡因重製封印而再度失去意識後,我便被學長叫來的阿利學長帶回醫療班休養了兩個禮拜。這段期間,公會陸陸續續的傳來了幾個消息:幻族領地周邊的怨靈大軍在一周前成功的淨化完畢,幻族人一下子就恢復了平靜的生活,雖然最初的委託「找回失蹤族人」還是沒有達成,但也在淨化完怨靈之後有了新的發現。初步推測,幻族們是掉到原世界去了,因此公會現在還在討論該以什麼樣的方式讓搜查小隊進軍原世界。55Please respect copyright.PENANAxqY1bIuWst
55Please respect copyright.PENANAwyGVQjJug7
55Please respect copyright.PENANAan53B1aW6n
另一方面,出版社把我的日記電子檔寄給了我,所以我這兩個禮拜是一邊休養,一邊在床上用阿利學長替我準備的筆記型電腦修修改改,過程中忽然覺得寫文章其實是一件非常有趣的事情,於是小宇宙大爆發,很快的便把長度約三十萬字左右的文章給修完了。55Please respect copyright.PENANAxsubzgyLHl
55Please respect copyright.PENANA12C2bmdCvx
55Please respect copyright.PENANALowJ6YsLkz
乍聽之下好像是件很浩大的工程,不過其實並沒有想像中困難。我只是把裡頭的人事物名稱給改掉,然後增加一些對設定的描述,以及細化各個角色內心的思考。這段時間裡,大家都三不五時跑來我的病房串串門子,順便替我看稿,似乎相當的樂此不疲。55Please respect copyright.PENANAO5oMfz87EG
55Please respect copyright.PENANAmLu3OKtfF7
55Please respect copyright.PENANA01rw6VgfBL
55Please respect copyright.PENANAjfA6asHwfQ
而當中,最常來找我的,就是阿利學長了。55Please respect copyright.PENANAFuGrvGNL8V
55Please respect copyright.PENANA8qt8jUxHtB
55Please respect copyright.PENANApDJyQoDvAC
55Please respect copyright.PENANAlzeJSiDUeW
「阿利學長,你覺得,我要把主角的性別改成女生嗎?或是不要把戀愛情結加進去?」這是開工前,我問著正在替我整理病房窗簾的阿利學長。他停下了手邊的動作,轉過頭來看著我。55Please respect copyright.PENANAUVH6vx0hbz
55Please respect copyright.PENANAl71gmjT4to
「你是在擔心,讀者看到男主角喜歡上自己的學長會有所不妥嗎?」55Please respect copyright.PENANAuJTL7qecHP
55Please respect copyright.PENANAJ5aY5HhShz
「嗯……」55Please respect copyright.PENANACJCU4otbw0
55Please respect copyright.PENANApgkk7ynS4Q
「該怎麼說呢?雖然部分讀者對這種愛情的接受度可能沒有這麼高,但我還是覺得,既然是你的故事,那你就忠實的呈現出你想呈現的感覺吧。也許不用刻意掩飾,又或許不用刻意突顯,淡淡的,朦朧的,清爽的,就像你給人的感覺一樣。」阿利學長微微歪著頭思索了一下,如是說道。55Please respect copyright.PENANA2ueA8gtHe3
55Please respect copyright.PENANACxjdxbnOEI
「我給人這種感覺?」我懷疑的看著他。55Please respect copyright.PENANAtsJiqnVIGk
55Please respect copyright.PENANApWf9QkTCfm
「是啊!」他爽朗一笑,接著對我眨眨眼睛:「溫潤似水,清爽如風。」55Please respect copyright.PENANAwZPBzys3QB
55Please respect copyright.PENANANKBgUVKVWh
55Please respect copyright.PENANAQwL2oB5QFF
我失笑:「像風的是阿利學長你吧?」55Please respect copyright.PENANAByNyEXlz6M
55Please respect copyright.PENANA1uro8usJbr
55Please respect copyright.PENANAnSJSmGHh0P
55Please respect copyright.PENANAGLQSUMmhTy
他又對我笑了下,接著回過頭,繼續了手邊的動作:「風,也分很多種唷。」55Please respect copyright.PENANAlFXrSEd3GX
55Please respect copyright.PENANANP9gG1RAvQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANAf9j8VQZnva
55Please respect copyright.PENANAlP3jUmDqXM
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最後,我決定在第一部裡,讓主角當個純粹景仰學長的小學弟。並不是不想面對我心中真正的感覺,而是讓那份愛戀淡淡的,不易察覺的存在於字裡行間,就像是我第一年的心情一樣。55Please respect copyright.PENANAbYjkhW7UkK
55Please respect copyright.PENANAoad3hSQHJV
細微得連自己都沒有察覺到,但若是在日後發現了,回過頭來看,也能找出蛛絲馬跡。55Please respect copyright.PENANA7ZVS7qtBPu
55Please respect copyright.PENANA7NhqRY66ND
55Please respect copyright.PENANASaa74BAfNl
55Please respect copyright.PENANAD2KxvsAsj2
在我把稿子寄出去之前,我先請阿利學長和學長兩個人替我看過一次。55Please respect copyright.PENANArXykGXujN3
阿利學長看完之後,笑著對我比了個拇指:「小學弟,你紅定了!」接著還興奮的用手肘撞了撞學長:「你說是吧?學弟?」55Please respect copyright.PENANA4Y3SHzJyJH
55Please respect copyright.PENANAfJ1qWZXlN6
55Please respect copyright.PENANAPJ0h4NorYh
學長勾起了一抹帥氣的笑容,帶著驕傲的:「褚,你可以的。」55Please respect copyright.PENANANlEb3E0G5q
55Please respect copyright.PENANAvHuU1j8DXQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANADIxQGulJ55
我對他們兩個人回以燦爛的一笑,帶著誠摯的感激,與一絲不易察覺的落寞。但阿利學長好像還是看出了什麼,伸手揉了揉我的頭髮,笑容中帶了點安慰。55Please respect copyright.PENANAYofNuZJyJe
55Please respect copyright.PENANABecfu060n6
55Please respect copyright.PENANADsSYfLEaCc
55Please respect copyright.PENANA4uzOmfVMgE
畢竟,學長還是沒有看出來,即使是我刻意淡化了那份藏在故事裡的愛情。55Please respect copyright.PENANAmOYcPKOUsH
55Please respect copyright.PENANApcUVeZ7Frg
55Please respect copyright.PENANAM9d86uyJrA
55Please respect copyright.PENANAkjiEy4YIUa
55Please respect copyright.PENANAnEhkGjvj0E
學長,你還是不知道我喜歡你,對吧?55Please respect copyright.PENANAzhqXU0ribU
55Please respect copyright.PENANAwqFAyYnKIQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANAfmInBvDwGS
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55Please respect copyright.PENANA3Mge7wrqfh
『在幻族任務中突破重圍,褚冥漾等人漂亮的淨化了怨靈大軍。但由幻族人消失的原因更深入調查後,發現其緣由竟與鬼王高手有所關聯!公會史上最大規模的搜查任務如火如荼的展開!而褚冥漾坎坷的戀愛之路又會如何發展呢?驚奇不斷的最新劇情,一切盡在《我的單身日記》!』55Please respect copyright.PENANA0OyojsbK0e
55Please respect copyright.PENANAF4IltS78Mj
『……米納斯,我可以問一下,妳到底都看了些什麼電視嗎?』55Please respect copyright.PENANA7fZI1NwCah
55Please respect copyright.PENANAPYornP4jjC
『主人,其實我並沒有看電視。』55Please respect copyright.PENANARKFnQnk8uo
55Please respect copyright.PENANA0L0kQuCbYM
『那為什麼妳最近變的這麼奇怪?』55Please respect copyright.PENANAwgmilaWAyB
55Please respect copyright.PENANAuLCrbrLfYh
『因為我看的是您的日記啊,主人。』55Please respect copyright.PENANAmEzaonEZfp
55Please respect copyright.PENANAoQmLtdXOad
『……原來是我的錯嗎!?』55Please respect copyright.PENANAIJ7XJFgkL8
55Please respect copyright.PENANAyY1jb3HahR
***55Please respect copyright.PENANAbX3BaeBsBe
55Please respect copyright.PENANApQ1VUXZCO5
55Please respect copyright.PENANA5Wc6nT2sSx
在幻族領地裡因重製封印而再度失去意識後,我便被學長叫來的阿利學長帶回醫療班休養了兩個禮拜。這段期間,公會陸陸續續的傳來了幾個消息:幻族領地周邊的怨靈大軍在一周前成功的淨化完畢,幻族人一下子就恢復了平靜的生活,雖然最初的委託「找回失蹤族人」還是沒有達成,但也在淨化完怨靈之後有了新的發現。初步推測,幻族們是掉到原世界去了,因此公會現在還在討論該以什麼樣的方式讓搜查小隊進軍原世界。55Please respect copyright.PENANAxqY1bIuWst
55Please respect copyright.PENANAwyGVQjJug7
55Please respect copyright.PENANAan53B1aW6n
另一方面,出版社把我的日記電子檔寄給了我,所以我這兩個禮拜是一邊休養,一邊在床上用阿利學長替我準備的筆記型電腦修修改改,過程中忽然覺得寫文章其實是一件非常有趣的事情,於是小宇宙大爆發,很快的便把長度約三十萬字左右的文章給修完了。55Please respect copyright.PENANAxsubzgyLHl
55Please respect copyright.PENANA12C2bmdCvx
55Please respect copyright.PENANALowJ6YsLkz
乍聽之下好像是件很浩大的工程,不過其實並沒有想像中困難。我只是把裡頭的人事物名稱給改掉,然後增加一些對設定的描述,以及細化各個角色內心的思考。這段時間裡,大家都三不五時跑來我的病房串串門子,順便替我看稿,似乎相當的樂此不疲。55Please respect copyright.PENANAO5oMfz87EG
55Please respect copyright.PENANAmLu3OKtfF7
55Please respect copyright.PENANA01rw6VgfBL
55Please respect copyright.PENANAjfA6asHwfQ
而當中,最常來找我的,就是阿利學長了。55Please respect copyright.PENANAFuGrvGNL8V
55Please respect copyright.PENANA8qt8jUxHtB
55Please respect copyright.PENANApDJyQoDvAC
55Please respect copyright.PENANAlzeJSiDUeW
「阿利學長,你覺得,我要把主角的性別改成女生嗎?或是不要把戀愛情結加進去?」這是開工前,我問著正在替我整理病房窗簾的阿利學長。他停下了手邊的動作,轉過頭來看著我。55Please respect copyright.PENANAUVH6vx0hbz
55Please respect copyright.PENANAl71gmjT4to
「你是在擔心,讀者看到男主角喜歡上自己的學長會有所不妥嗎?」55Please respect copyright.PENANAuJTL7qecHP
55Please respect copyright.PENANAJ5aY5HhShz
「嗯……」55Please respect copyright.PENANACJCU4otbw0
55Please respect copyright.PENANApgkk7ynS4Q
「該怎麼說呢?雖然部分讀者對這種愛情的接受度可能沒有這麼高,但我還是覺得,既然是你的故事,那你就忠實的呈現出你想呈現的感覺吧。也許不用刻意掩飾,又或許不用刻意突顯,淡淡的,朦朧的,清爽的,就像你給人的感覺一樣。」阿利學長微微歪著頭思索了一下,如是說道。55Please respect copyright.PENANA2ueA8gtHe3
55Please respect copyright.PENANACxjdxbnOEI
「我給人這種感覺?」我懷疑的看著他。55Please respect copyright.PENANAtsJiqnVIGk
55Please respect copyright.PENANApWf9QkTCfm
「是啊!」他爽朗一笑,接著對我眨眨眼睛:「溫潤似水,清爽如風。」55Please respect copyright.PENANAwZPBzys3QB
55Please respect copyright.PENANANKBgUVKVWh
55Please respect copyright.PENANAQwL2oB5QFF
我失笑:「像風的是阿利學長你吧?」55Please respect copyright.PENANAByNyEXlz6M
55Please respect copyright.PENANA1uro8usJbr
55Please respect copyright.PENANAnSJSmGHh0P
55Please respect copyright.PENANAGLQSUMmhTy
他又對我笑了下,接著回過頭,繼續了手邊的動作:「風,也分很多種唷。」55Please respect copyright.PENANAlFXrSEd3GX
55Please respect copyright.PENANANP9gG1RAvQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANAf9j8VQZnva
55Please respect copyright.PENANAlP3jUmDqXM
55Please respect copyright.PENANAPzHbnGCzZK
最後,我決定在第一部裡,讓主角當個純粹景仰學長的小學弟。並不是不想面對我心中真正的感覺,而是讓那份愛戀淡淡的,不易察覺的存在於字裡行間,就像是我第一年的心情一樣。55Please respect copyright.PENANAbYjkhW7UkK
55Please respect copyright.PENANAoad3hSQHJV
細微得連自己都沒有察覺到,但若是在日後發現了,回過頭來看,也能找出蛛絲馬跡。55Please respect copyright.PENANA7ZVS7qtBPu
55Please respect copyright.PENANA7NhqRY66ND
55Please respect copyright.PENANASaa74BAfNl
55Please respect copyright.PENANAD2KxvsAsj2
在我把稿子寄出去之前,我先請阿利學長和學長兩個人替我看過一次。55Please respect copyright.PENANArXykGXujN3
阿利學長看完之後,笑著對我比了個拇指:「小學弟,你紅定了!」接著還興奮的用手肘撞了撞學長:「你說是吧?學弟?」55Please respect copyright.PENANA4Y3SHzJyJH
55Please respect copyright.PENANAfJ1qWZXlN6
55Please respect copyright.PENANAPJ0h4NorYh
學長勾起了一抹帥氣的笑容,帶著驕傲的:「褚,你可以的。」55Please respect copyright.PENANANlEb3E0G5q
55Please respect copyright.PENANAvHuU1j8DXQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANADIxQGulJ55
我對他們兩個人回以燦爛的一笑,帶著誠摯的感激,與一絲不易察覺的落寞。但阿利學長好像還是看出了什麼,伸手揉了揉我的頭髮,笑容中帶了點安慰。55Please respect copyright.PENANAYofNuZJyJe
55Please respect copyright.PENANABecfu060n6
55Please respect copyright.PENANADsSYfLEaCc
55Please respect copyright.PENANA4uzOmfVMgE
畢竟,學長還是沒有看出來,即使是我刻意淡化了那份藏在故事裡的愛情。55Please respect copyright.PENANAmOYcPKOUsH
55Please respect copyright.PENANApcUVeZ7Frg
55Please respect copyright.PENANAM9d86uyJrA
55Please respect copyright.PENANAkjiEy4YIUa
55Please respect copyright.PENANAnEhkGjvj0E
學長,你還是不知道我喜歡你,對吧?55Please respect copyright.PENANAzhqXU0ribU
55Please respect copyright.PENANAwqFAyYnKIQ
55Please respect copyright.PENANAfmInBvDwGS