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舊版_尋夢之歌(online)_初曲
作者:
彤鷹

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尋夢之歌(online) 19-8後記
第十九章(第八節)後記X某鷹的話40Please respect copyright.PENANAAZuqTTK9o3
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耶!!睽違了三年的光景,尋夢之歌終於是完結啦!!(灑花)40Please respect copyright.PENANAVPf1yaWPFZ
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結局會不會太爛呢?總而言之,是沒結果的結果啊!!我挺喜歡這種沒結局般的結局。(歐飛)40Please respect copyright.PENANAQdl3ZPkaU1
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落葉木頭和韓冰冰塊連接吻都沒有,不是我的錯啊!!!(逃)40Please respect copyright.PENANAR49XIMPYXI
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咳!雖然說,尋夢之歌的預想,只是短篇小說,但是由於某鷹拖稿,還有突然想起一堆點子,漸漸的,變成了大部頭的文章。而且每次回看自己當初寫的文字,總有重寫的衝動。(汗)40Please respect copyright.PENANA0rrSIi4Z2H
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某鷹曾想要不要單用第一人稱視角來描述故事,也就是以主角的觀點來看整件事。這樣,無關乎發生在主角上的事,則不需寫入。40Please respect copyright.PENANADQL8OnQf26
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但是,又怕背景結構不夠完整,有些人會看不懂,所以參雜了許多第三人稱的描摩方式。(雖然如此,還是有人跟我抱怨,看不懂。)40Please respect copyright.PENANAABMYIQI47h
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事實上,尋夢中間本來還有一大段(就是解決白的種族任務),但是為了加快截稿速度,就刪掉了。所以會發覺,有些稱號拿的莫名奇妙,人物消失的不明不白!!(被毆)40Please respect copyright.PENANAwmJ4TRHzv7
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某鷹所看過的網路遊戲文章,主要脈絡總是為了敘述感情,或是作為冒險的依附;再加上,一般的文章所埋下的伏筆,很快就會公佈謎底,而尋夢的伏筆答案,則是在故事末端,所以有很多人看不懂這篇文章的主軸和伏筆,大概是某鷹表達的不夠完善和文章冗長的影響吧。40Please respect copyright.PENANAM68g9SqoCZ
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「尋夢,是為了實現夢想而存在的。」40Please respect copyright.PENANAk9zeF8CFHQ
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某鷹有玩線上遊戲,對於線上遊戲的功能上漸漸的出現了渴求和盼望。或許這種說法聽起來不太恰當,但現今的遊戲,大多為了娛樂、排遣無聊、用來發洩心情而存在的,只能有消遣的作為。40Please respect copyright.PENANAbZl0vSlqsb
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所以,尋夢之歌所描述的遊戲規格、規範、宗旨,可算是某鷹對遊戲的期許。40Please respect copyright.PENANA6uskab4hm2
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所以,我以遊戲宗旨作為主軸,將角色們的故事承載於「實現夢想,給予幸福」的定義上,儘可能表達,並且將伏筆設定的很淺顯、繫於一點,而且故事還能盡情的惡搞!40Please respect copyright.PENANA546pgUSiav
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因為伏筆和故事並不是主幹,他們只是用於闡述我的想法的一項元素。40Please respect copyright.PENANAsmg1ie6QnV
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此外,至於會不會寫續集,某鷹自己也不曉得。(汗40Please respect copyright.PENANAhyLEb23G2F
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所以……哈、哈哈……(乾笑中40Please respect copyright.PENANAQcEMGEpGTp
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最後,某鷹在這裡衷心祝福大家,「實現夢想,得到幸福。」40Please respect copyright.PENANAGtNovzA809
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尋夢之歌(on line) 完40Please respect copyright.PENANAnMTJA7iQTj
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