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創作元素挑戰〈四〉：教室在宇宙的鐵軌上
ENTRY #3
Author: 鶖翎
Published:
Nov 25, 2016
創作元素挑戰〈四〉：教室在宇宙的鐵軌上
Published:
Nov 25, 2016
ENTRY #3
結語
Author: 鶖翎
Published:
Nov 25, 2016
1 Min Read
205 Words
No Plagiarism!X1v2XeBi1yuDXNk9Yjmuposted on PＥNAＮＡ

因為只有兩位參加者，系統不出現排名選擇，我就簡單講一下想法:)

《三棵幸運草》直接以我設立的標題來寫故事，想法很有趣，只是短短一篇放入的角色過多到無法讓角色立體一點，甚至在最後一場投票討論中出現敘述雜亂的現象。最後埋了伏筆，但是讓人想知道出去後會遇到什麼事情。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVwiM5LaSzr

《通往來世的列車》想到幾部動漫作品，雖然實際上不太一樣，不過都是很有趣的發想，列車的前進也等同前進來世，敘述上有些符號錯誤與錯字，背景的架構如果能再更多一點應該會更好，尤其是主要的青年跟小女孩。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSYoodCg4qt

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