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來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩 - 隱題詩示範作〈倫敦鐵橋垮下來〉( aka〈終極之謊〉) | Penana
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來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
ENTRY #2
Author: W.H.
Published:
Nov 10, 2023
來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
Published:
Nov 10, 2023
ENTRY #2
隱題詩示範作〈倫敦鐵橋垮下來〉( aka〈終極之謊〉)
Author: W.H.
Published:
Nov 10, 2023
2 Mins Read
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〈倫敦鐵橋垮下來〉

倫理道德是他常穿的外套

敦親睦鄰是他戴的安全帽

鐵定不能丟掉，深吸一口氣

橋就這樣過去，十分順利！

垮的是牛頭馬面的信心：

下一個不知是否也如此特異

來這裡的都怕到發抖，唯獨

此人，不，此鬼領先群倫

瞧他一臉正氣，又厚敦敦

看走眼，以為是一塊精鐵

於是讓他順利通過奈何橋

孰知是眼力不好被他打垮

那副道貌岸然的面具底下

多少骯髒的紀錄隨手拈來

只能等到下一關，哎！

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➊ 這首詩，第一次上架在今年的兒童節，參加了「新詩專題創挑~~」，題目是以「倫敦鐵橋垮下來」為詩題，寫一首 15 行 (含) 以內的新詩。

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https://www.penana.com/article/1059955

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我這首詩的內容乍看之下，和詩題「倫敦鐵橋垮下來」沒有關係，其實頗為相關；「倫敦鐵橋」有個恐怖的都市傳說：把活著的小孩埋進地基裡，就能看守倫敦橋，這⋯⋯豈不是和牛頭馬面把守奈何橋，異曲同工嗎？

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正因如此，我將這兩者做一連結，寫了這首詩〈倫敦鐵橋垮下來〉，又名〈終極之謊〉；有人成天說謊，說到連 Ta 自己都忘記曾經說過什麼謊，這種人，不知道以後會不會騙過牛頭馬面？不過現代科技十分發達，陰間「照妖鏡」設備也與時俱進，不是那麽好唬弄的了。

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【維基百科：倫敦橋】

https://reurl.cc/Nqnp9n

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➋ 民俗傳說裡，牛頭馬面是

把守地府中奈何橋的神明，生前犯罪的鬼魂通過，就推落橋下，讓橋下的毒蛇、怪獸吞噬。

而行善之人，死後通過奈何橋，十分輕易。

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【維基百科：牛頭馬面】

https://reurl.cc/n7yEA2

【維基百科：奈何橋】

https://reurl.cc/lvl9A6

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附圖原畫作者是 Oscar-Claude Monet (1840-1926)。作者去世70年以上，其著作財產權已經消滅，原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain)，任何人均可使用。

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【原詩出處】

https://www.penana.com/article/1060773

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每人限投一首 不一定要押韻 新詩現代詩創作 請先看題目 8~20行 隱題詩 時程四週
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