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來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
ENTRY #35
Author: 星尋
Published:
Nov 26, 2023
來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
Published:
Nov 26, 2023
ENTRY #35
如同流星，閃盡，夜終
Author: 星尋
Published:
Nov 26, 2023
1 Min Read
202 Words
No Plagiarism!UXRAOAfKjjMZ2NSGy31kposted on PＥNAＮＡ

何者如我般迅疾，點連成線，只需一閃即滅

那未經同意的猖狂，也不過是止於一抹微笑

可已無心流連人世百態的我，不再回首而望

無須在意那星河綿延流轉終歸何處，僅此刻

於深空中剎那閃燃，早已塵埃落定，然此星

行而過仍意猶未盡，只因光軌如鋒，就此時

弧光一斬，納刀於夜，此刻此星此時此一刃

隱於寂而沒於無，光終歸消逝於黑夜的深暗

680Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPye2iekGUk

描寫流星於夜中墜下的過程，一閃而過，最終埋進黑夜並隱沒。680Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡED0aQwavAh

抱歉獻醜了，我的文筆不是很好，但看大家的創作有些好美，有些好有趣，所以也來嘗試試看。680Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAJ63FO5GmV

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