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來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
ENTRY #41
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Nov 29, 2023
來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
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Nov 29, 2023
ENTRY #41
我成了我作品的囚徒
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Published:
Nov 29, 2023
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No Plagiarism!9AgQ3ZLnitCMoaFyzUqKposted on PＥNAＮＡ

✒️:NeocreationN ⚛️(IG)🍌(Penana)🕊️(TW)🔥(YT)🎨Leonardo AI

我甘願為你痴迷而沉醉

成就妳獻上我幾眶熱淚

了解你的世上只我一人

我的任性早成彼此負累

作孽自禍不配你的高貴

品味孤獨冷漠使我空虛

的而且確往昔只能回味

囚禁靈魂我願日夜心衰

徒然無功深愛已是原罪

654Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCA6x0NHkJc

在靈感乾涸的狀態下寫出的一首詩，所以自問沒有寫得太好……

但想將它送給一些「過分深愛」自己作品的作者，其實沒有作者不愛自己的故事，我對《神滅雅記》的「愛」也大到甚至不想將它投稿拿去評審，倘若千金相贈我也不會交出版權。但寫作就如戀愛，本該是開心的事，要是只能苦苦堅持，似乎就本末倒置了。希望「寫作」能成為各位靈魂伴侶，而不是帶來痛苦的負擔。

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每人限投一首 新詩現代詩創作 請先看題目 不一定要押韻 隱題詩 時程四週 8~20行
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