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來寫OO詩 ④：飲料詩
ENTRY #3
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
來寫OO詩 ④：飲料詩
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
ENTRY #3
汽水
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
1 Min Read
107 Words
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冰涼的清甜  清冽的滋味

就那樣的貫穿了我們的夏天

泡沫  在孩童的搖晃中 

彷彿不甘於被囚禁在小小腦袋裡的夢想 希望 憧憬

喜悅且爭先恐後的湧出

泡沫的波波聲  是童年的聲音

很久以後

我拉開了同樣的易拉環

卻只聽到了泡沫消散的嘶嘶聲

和空留惆悵的甜膩

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每人限投一首 不一定要押韻 新詩現代詩創作 請先看題目 6~20行 飲料詩 時程十天
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