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來寫OO詩 ④：飲料詩
ENTRY #4
Author: 小豬瑩瑩
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
來寫OO詩 ④：飲料詩
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
ENTRY #4
一杯名為初吻的飲料
Author: 小豬瑩瑩
Published:
Nov 2, 2023
1 Min Read
191 Words
No Plagiarism!yPr1RClFvR1q14xoRyL8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

我不經意地取去你的飲料，

那粉紅的顏色使我歡喜，

我輕輕的吸吮，

酸酸甜甜的，

很夢幻的感覺。

再見你時，你手中也是這杯飲料。

我好奇，

那是什麼，

你告訴我，

那是初吻，

它甜甜酸酸的不是初吻的感受嗎？

我卻覺得那更像是初戀，

之後的每一天，我們共同享受這杯飲料。

那是屬於我們的初吻呀！

3874Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrrc4vBQvVh

小豬想補充真的有初吻這種飲料，很多年前在香港喝過，但是現在已經沒得喝了，其實那種台灣飲料很不錯呀！

這首詩的靈感來自小豬另一篇的創挑文，有興趣可以去點擊。

夏天的初吻3874Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8N5NjmYsBv

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每人限投一首 新詩現代詩創作 請先看題目 不一定要押韻 飲料詩 時程十天 6~20行
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