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在書店拿起書時,我總是感到十分羞恥。8964 copyright protection279PENANAiYh5ElhDH8 維尼
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臺灣本地的書跟日本過來的翻譯書,光是簡介就能看出水準的差異。8964 copyright protection279PENANAnnKIm4TSJZ 維尼
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我們缺乏良好的閱讀風氣,以及自學的動力和管道,這樣的結果就反映在產業上、乃至於作品當中。8964 copyright protection279PENANA4kl4rNoZ5G 維尼
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在日本,書背的簡介、或者書腰的宣傳詞可能是由該書作者,或者由該作責編撰寫;而臺灣應該也是這樣。8964 copyright protection279PENANAbeYY4tqYj9 維尼
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光以簡介而言,則可以分成兩邊敘述。8964 copyright protection279PENANAvPuQoS3yJV 維尼
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倘若是由編輯所寫,代表我們的編輯不懂得怎麼推書,畢竟在這個產業當中,編輯基本上都過著血汗勞工一般的日子,我認為這確實情有可原。8964 copyright protection279PENANAuE9FmF1SmD 維尼
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日本編輯的薪資水準應該比較高,那相對能找到的人也會程度好一點。8964 copyright protection279PENANADvjzLVTfDg 維尼
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至於臺灣,以現在的薪資狀況而言基本上都是用真愛在做事,薪水也就那個樣子,實在不好意思要求人家,畢竟多做事錢也不會變多。8964 copyright protection279PENANAxWfQ0OIlnz 維尼
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當然,這些都是我蒐集各種網站的資訊,不一定完全正確就是了。8964 copyright protection279PENANA3gvFVPslmM 維尼
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至於另一邊,倘若是由該書作者所寫,那代表問題就相當嚴重。8964 copyright protection279PENANA3b6efMPNns 維尼
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而進一步來說,這個可能性還相當大。8964 copyright protection279PENANAdK38PyPWyQ 維尼
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畢竟編輯有很多事情要忙,把簡介這種東西交給作者本人操刀也不足為奇。8964 copyright protection279PENANAwOpGWBk4L4 維尼
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而在這種時候,若是市面上多是那個樣子的簡介,就代表作者也就是那樣。8964 copyright protection279PENANAQdHERjxOmy 維尼
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我時常因為封面插圖而拿起書,看了下背後的簡介就放下書。8964 copyright protection279PENANALHcZIM3Wuj 維尼
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光看簡介就覺得可以不用看。8964 copyright protection279PENANAc5v7vPV5QU 維尼
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儘管不排除有那種正文寫得好,但不太會寫簡介的作者存在,但基本上能寫出好簡介,正文也寫得好的作者機率出現更高一點。8964 copyright protection279PENANAZMDpZ910E9 維尼
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簡介是廣告,利用那僅有的篇幅向大家說「請把我買回家吧」,這種珍貴的宣傳機會應該要好好把握。8964 copyright protection279PENANAK3C3kH3EkA 維尼
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以下的文章,則是要如何撰寫簡介的分享。像是有哪些值得注意的事情,也會用實際的例子來展示。而這些內容,都是我自己學習整理而來,僅供大家參考。8964 copyright protection279PENANAAp6QObq9UF 維尼
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另外,文章中所用來舉例的簡介,都是由我自行撰寫,當然,有應用到他人作品當作範例的地方,我撰寫的簡介已經徵求到作者同意,得以在此發表。而這邊也感謝 VIA 和伍德·瓦懷特,因為有你們兩位,這個文章才得以成篇。8964 copyright protection279PENANAq5PdWGcJcO 維尼
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額外補充一點,上述對於產業的各種心得,都是出自我個人的意見,跟兩位作者無關,望知悉。8964 copyright protection279PENANA5lIQ7iTfNE 維尼
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那麼,接下來我們正式開始吧。8964 copyright protection279PENANAgDwXBcPmyO 維尼
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首先,第一步要搞清楚「簡介」和「大綱」的區別。8964 copyright protection279PENANAwcEajupWIi 維尼
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這兩者的區別是「受眾」,也就是「寫給誰看的」。8964 copyright protection279PENANA7eTbzpPlew 維尼
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以簡介而言,簡單來說就是廣告,是寫給「買書的讀者」,以及沒看過這本書,「你想吸引他來讀的人」。8964 copyright protection279PENANABVNY22wKQO 維尼
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而大綱,則是寫給「編輯」或者「自己」看的,用來整理劇情脈絡、告訴編輯這部作品的設計圖,展現作品的價值。8964 copyright protection279PENANAmnGqqhq4Uz 維尼
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在撰寫簡介和大綱時,呈現的手法會有不同。簡介是透過一些方法吸引人來看,大綱則是作者本人的紀錄,以及用簡單的方式告訴編輯這個故事到底發生什麼事,看出版社要不要用。8964 copyright protection279PENANAsKGDJzYS0T 維尼
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因此,簡介必須要吊人胃口,大綱則是愈清楚簡單愈好。在這一部分,就得提到所謂的資訊量。8964 copyright protection279PENANA1XNnJ8Ep4m 維尼
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在你的故事當中,什麼東西是能作為吸引,能直接寫在簡介上的,又有什麼是不需要寫出來的,要自己思考分辨。8964 copyright protection279PENANAVSx9dVYJ4D 維尼
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如果是直接用文字說明的,應該不太好懂,以下則進入舉例環節。8964 copyright protection279PENANAYT5nxggSDP 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection279PENANAmp53hZISEs 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection279PENANAdGGUvK7N2h 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANArizZKlf4cT 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection279PENANACPNJmgJgDf 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection279PENANAfDy7XkiJBD 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection279PENANAiz8MiwBCEB 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection279PENANA5WwG8OiVKB 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection279PENANAcEaoe0SwEu 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection279PENANA3FVBNpQBCu 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAgsvNisze5r 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection279PENANAi8Z4p4aZj0 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection279PENANAE70ZtM63o3 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAyUYrNXdcKN 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAuDQ8xEzUuo 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection279PENANAJWYHnrthhr 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection279PENANAW8sCoWQQ9i 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection279PENANAbElKnpnI2r 維尼
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在上述的簡介文字中,有很多是我沒有交代的。8964 copyright protection279PENANAG8XCRA5AFT 維尼
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包括男主角賀輔的能力,以及故事碰上怎樣的麻煩,前者是因為這是故事比較核心的設定之一,後者則是受限於篇幅,因此就簡單提一下,引起讀者的好奇。8964 copyright protection279PENANAoDWRH8sAeV 維尼
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而我有交代的資訊,包含:介紹男女主角大致的性格、兩人相處的方式、稍微介紹他們擁有怎樣的背景,有偵探要素,因此選擇提到偵探事務所,至於房租部分,則是表示他們行動的動機與目的,代表他們是為了賺錢而展開活動。8964 copyright protection279PENANAEI0W7o34AT 維尼
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這邊先提一個重點,依照簡介所擁有的篇幅多寡,來決定文字的重點和想要透漏的資訊量。8964 copyright protection279PENANAHfwAaapAil 維尼
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以這一篇而言,因為我不打算寫太長,當初我鎖定的重點,就放在如何呈現本作具有魅力的「輕鬆的氛圍」上,而透過角色的對話互動,就是個最直接的表達方式,這麼做還能直接套用原作中出現的句子,也不太會離題。8964 copyright protection279PENANALpERT84KeX 維尼
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下面再舉個例子。8964 copyright protection279PENANAHuHrNCFBsM 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection279PENANAH6Mk2hJ92u 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection279PENANAINFNuUaJWq 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANAPiGUivAVdS 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection279PENANAoOkcTOom5O 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection279PENANAzXIjQdkmxI 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection279PENANAJa5w0CxlUX 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection279PENANAg3bS4qpJwN 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection279PENANAU7FiHtKe7Y 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection279PENANAGsr6NiduI8 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection279PENANArziLwsnQps 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection279PENANAxhPmRk49w0 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection279PENANAAHfsY3GZCQ 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection279PENANAwcrWXuLrzo 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAS89uRtmizJ 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection279PENANAJ1xQBxVq3C 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection279PENANADxwrC6fbGh 維尼
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本作屬於近未來的運動作品,在這個簡介當中,我有交代的資訊包括:提一下本作核心的運動項目、介紹男主角是個學生、他所面對的第一個衝突,也就是有女生寄情書給他、介紹女主角、並且帶出本作的主線,亦即在比賽中奪下優勝這個目標。8964 copyright protection279PENANAe6LT6fixFQ 維尼
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至於我沒交代的資訊包含:有哪些重要事件、對手角色、訓練內容等等。8964 copyright protection279PENANAqMtb0kJCRM 維尼
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這也是受限於篇幅的關係。而這個簡介所採取的策略是,將第一個最讓人感到期待的衝突點拋出來,並且順勢用對話句刻劃角色。畢竟拿起這本書的人,肯定知道男女主會參加比賽,只是「因為什麼契機」參賽,用這樣的場景來吸引讀者翻閱正文。8964 copyright protection279PENANA5bKEqSOOmm 維尼
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這些是關於策略與資訊量的說明。8964 copyright protection279PENANAwX0Kv2UEGC 維尼
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下面我們更進一步來談細節。8964 copyright protection279PENANAnoXYJAHmHc 維尼
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我會用簡介中筆記的方式,來告訴大家一些重點。8964 copyright protection279PENANA8JJ7RVgVPY 維尼
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這邊直接把第一篇複製來用。8964 copyright protection279PENANAinHZmQwMn4 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection279PENANATeWP1H8uK6 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection279PENANAeo31vs68FI 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANAm5tOkDqnTy 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection279PENANAGqBFc2jcV6 維尼
(描述故事的背景,發生在什麼地方。用偵探事務所這個實際的建築物,能讓讀者產生畫面。提到積欠房租是這是置入引人好奇的點,也順便帶入角色。)8964 copyright protection279PENANABmBoEGJxFy 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection279PENANAWeaE00E9sV 維尼
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(用對話句塑造角色。選用這句話是為了順便帶入男主角賀輔的名字。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA5qCtPMc693 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection279PENANA1zl6ktGXoc 維尼
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(塑造男主角的人物性格。同時這也是原作中優秀的點,關於人物設計很優秀,相當貼近人心。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA8Oxl4OvcKD 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAaqKW9bAh4K 維尼
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(跟讀者透露兩人的關係,以及交代男主角會做出什麼事,藉此塑造角色。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA8NqzeisE9o 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection279PENANAhd4Mnm407v 維尼
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(由於只有對話句會顯得抽象,因此這邊用描述句介紹人物外觀,讓讀者產生畫面。也交代兩人當下的動作。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA3jzEWrHftp 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection279PENANA1ENAjCpbfo 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAmbBs7Wngga
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection279PENANApfCjJEvTTL 維尼
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(前面是間接透漏兩人的關係,這邊是直接提到。而這邊也更進一步交代本作有趣的地方,鮮活的對話。)8964 copyright protection279PENANANtuPJXFDga 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection279PENANAIRDyTCsY6Y 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection279PENANA1cn45DP5PH 維尼
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(說明兩人展開行動的動機,下一句則是用具體的動作和地點讓讀者產生畫面。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA70e6xda0iD 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAh3fFeT92YP
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAVhpVsAJqZk 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection279PENANASRSMimKMTj 維尼
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(這邊的對話原本就很貼近人心,所以我就直接放過來。算是簡介中的主要亮點。)8964 copyright protection279PENANANAfq4xeiSD 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAzLxeb7TIid
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection279PENANAfQIMVXZx4r 維尼
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(帶入事件發生,用婦人點出委託者的身分,並引讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA3lw6MFSXNX 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANADFaMLL3uCV
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection279PENANAEEME5QAfo8 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection279PENANABoGI2EkRGW 維尼
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(基於篇幅考量,我並沒有寫太多推理或冒險的要素,只是稍微概括一下他們有麻煩上門,讓讀者產生興趣。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAUiic4uJzz7 維尼
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接著則是第二篇的複製。8964 copyright protection279PENANAHzK8nyty6s 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection279PENANAJX0wCRClfj 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAEMEDqKJjXI
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection279PENANAM6eAk2YAoN 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANATBa4e1TvkG 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANArMHW7PUWv0
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection279PENANAeryCIQf3JX 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection279PENANAG6ZIIwoXq0 維尼
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(直接介紹本作核心運動項目。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAi4oTjYUKvv 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection279PENANA7oVS52NkmB 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAr89GQfmjhy
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(交代主角是誰,有什麼人物背景。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA7ZLih6E6yY 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAxEDJU2S4jO
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection279PENANArT8ZBGRqdo 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA7VwBDmajP3
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(描述第一個衝突發生。吸引讀者目光。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAjgWhd4Ncnf 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection279PENANANcgBjhmq6a 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAtmUMZOeNAM
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(點名重要場景的地點,並且帶入女主角。先描述外觀與年紀,讓讀者有初步印象。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAUE4lqDY9id 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA9trEeX0frN
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection279PENANAhQ4pizxkNU 維尼
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8964 copyright protection279PENANA3BJfPhVZPa 維尼
(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAYdFkuLck1f 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection279PENANAlogMHnccp6 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAWga4rV63IL
8964 copyright protection279PENANADkgC1LkqMQ 維尼
(描繪女主角當下的表情與動作,用美少女來讓讀者讀下去。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAi61ONJpi7X 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAq4MvrlvhYJ
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection279PENANAIclub3bDxk 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAUpOzOfGNpi
8964 copyright protection279PENANAibziR6LKUa 維尼
(利用男主角的內心描述,貼近跟讀者的距離。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAucko1Avfsh 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAWbmLb3edgR
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection279PENANA7qvIehNgzH 維尼
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(承上,上面是直接用對話句道出當下瞬間的反應,後面則是男主角意識到自己的反應。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAgIedd5FrSP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAnrlYeAZxWM
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection279PENANAZOkCT6UYe3 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAPFLZVNpu5v
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(告訴讀者有事情即將發生,將描述重點放到女主角身上。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAegB8FepCx4 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAsEjvcgpZm3
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection279PENANAXyiZXkXFzc 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANANgoh5Ttc8p
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(原來不是告白啊,像這樣出乎讀者意料,同時也讓讀者感到對後續故事的好奇。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA5arwGZXAhD 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection279PENANANO2O2BXbHF 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAx5wp9lqIsC
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(闡明男主的背景與反差,以及女主角所朝向的目標,關於兩人邂逅所展開的故事。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAyEu9uaZ1uc 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection279PENANAeq9ieLeAUt 維尼
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(最後再次強化本作的主線,要在運動比賽中奪勝這件事。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAUkcE9kI2zl 維尼
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8964 copyright protection279PENANAXTEI90IGsT 維尼
以上兩段簡介都屬於短的簡介,而倘若有更多文字運用,就能寫長簡介。8964 copyright protection279PENANAO6QB4RbowL 維尼
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而這種就能交代更多資訊與衝突,也多半會被運用在參賽文章的簡介,也就是所謂的「大綱式簡介」。8964 copyright protection279PENANAf3gIqQV3iK 維尼
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大綱是給評審與編輯看的,需要清楚交代事件轉折,讓評審知道你有將轉折與結構安排在故事當中,同時也能讀出你是否了解本作的賣點,以及能讓他們推廣的方向。8964 copyright protection279PENANANZ29NcKter 維尼
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簡介則是寫給讀者看的,需要交代出衝突,但又不能寫得太多,這樣就不會想實際閱讀故事了。8964 copyright protection279PENANAIo8Q4V9jHd 維尼
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所以,為了滿足這種兩邊都要的狀況,比賽文章才會多採用「大綱式簡介」8964 copyright protection279PENANArd5TbFxX98 維尼
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下面的故事是由我撰寫,但因為是舊作,在結構上並不是太過穩固,但還是能給大家作為參考。8964 copyright protection279PENANAkQjGLx7chN 維尼
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection279PENANAbIEjnLve5n 維尼
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection279PENANAIcDxwmu71Q 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANACSP2wmp7vz 維尼
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曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection279PENANAMlYQJyJI2H 維尼
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遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection279PENANAO2Z8DkIo9t 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAmuak9NRu5J
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升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection279PENANA4PCsQpjZvu 維尼
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection279PENANA2maWXFlrfC 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAfQ8mHXZTCp
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她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection279PENANAP8CoSKCfKX 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAzInWQwgAf2
8964 copyright protection279PENANAJxWGeP43z8 維尼
「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAN0KxPFsfPX 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAvU2Z00mOvs
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「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAQcD4h8iH9U 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAocabZK7iYw
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAzRRxMDPkaU 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA4Fd5nBQGnT
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因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection279PENANA5u9g2NgsKU 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANADuMoyb8upJ
8964 copyright protection279PENANAfumfecwbcM 維尼
然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection279PENANA8lMv4CEx84 維尼
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection279PENANAQsiHhsPgNZ 維尼
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8964 copyright protection279PENANAT7qNjwKM5a 維尼
不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection279PENANAydOCT1VezM 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAG12gwq35Ig
8964 copyright protection279PENANAUuFXtaw1yF 維尼
千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection279PENANANdAMRltOSy 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAXTYe8Ehwxm
8964 copyright protection279PENANA5JVf7p1B1M 維尼
然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection279PENANAE2YHvI7SW5 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANATbyfEs6dpq
8964 copyright protection279PENANA12QacaAPuG 維尼
「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAP929e3O3J3 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAquhdDQBOrL
8964 copyright protection279PENANAAZZ6BVsuq4 維尼
面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection279PENANAGzKvHHfnzP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAgavRCUA141
8964 copyright protection279PENANAUND4pmUwhf 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection279PENANAugyg9uHz47 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAS75OxUL15z
8964 copyright protection279PENANAc7pdnf7s0B 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection279PENANATp9FnPXONh 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAUaGjXkX5qf
8964 copyright protection279PENANAU3RPhD0Zxs 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection279PENANAn82imNj9fF 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAYb5YBnbfCe
8964 copyright protection279PENANA2MkH20iAzp 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection279PENANA3ZDwFeX5l2 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA16D20I3zqZ
8964 copyright protection279PENANAjCdvP4XhGL 維尼
「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection279PENANACrRWwa3npG 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAYLFisPyvOx
8964 copyright protection279PENANAsIYjJWXxJ8 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection279PENANAY98vtihaTd 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAxno1mQdqBw
8964 copyright protection279PENANAg5XJXIPNfi 維尼
漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection279PENANAn75yaz9a30 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAEB1Pu7DN9i
8964 copyright protection279PENANAQTEzVShn12 維尼
先給大家讀過一遍,下面則是一樣用實際解說:8964 copyright protection279PENANA84b3fd7ra9 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANATczOhbXBtU
8964 copyright protection279PENANAffIMeqDg5O 維尼
8964 copyright protection279PENANAA0E1pcRaIE 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA0ICf7ZoXTP
8964 copyright protection279PENANAs8BVMXHgbB 維尼
《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection279PENANAxAH2gsWa1X 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAsDf2iGo6gP
8964 copyright protection279PENANAYb0hkRzauL 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAvXZAsNpo1O
8964 copyright protection279PENANAmUYBjzryyy 維尼
原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection279PENANAf9TCNZ3ltD 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAafMsqPHiL8
8964 copyright protection279PENANA27xeMx0CNE 維尼
簡介:8964 copyright protection279PENANAjO5HNtoIeJ 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANABHdCnMW3O0
8964 copyright protection279PENANAROCmWVsAZc 維尼
曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection279PENANAYdSl3hNHzP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAvz8tHynjCc
8964 copyright protection279PENANAarbpPj174c 維尼
(點出主角,交代其人物背景。交代事件起因,且用實際場景來描繪畫面。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAvD4KSdfP1Q 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAh2p9ucB15G
8964 copyright protection279PENANAyCZpmDHFRe 維尼
遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection279PENANAl3tFWCM3gh 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA0S0rBEBOyU
8964 copyright protection279PENANA6bWHiitTE3 維尼
(明確地講述其目標。也就是本作的核心。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAaF3CFJ4853 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANABorZw64Y2N
8964 copyright protection279PENANAzDWR5VhB5i 維尼
升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection279PENANANuWjli5Hnf 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAOQV4ElYmcX
8964 copyright protection279PENANA2fZtNDJjZN 維尼
(交代人物的身分,以及間接透露年齡。帶出第一個發生的衝突。勾起讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAf6LwLqHd3O 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAstGmcWaogQ
8964 copyright protection279PENANADJfK8ZdyzV 維尼
就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection279PENANALQeDNZzMRP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANANvV59CIv2z
8964 copyright protection279PENANA7BkInH99ef 維尼
(讓讀者出乎意料。並且導入女主角。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAqiYnLVm7mh 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANASL3PfLDr52
8964 copyright protection279PENANAsY1OqMREUQ 維尼
她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection279PENANAThXWpPg9fk 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAEeaBTxuN2O
8964 copyright protection279PENANA3uopUHhwIO 維尼
(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAqJCdMGMkLu 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAmCFNcvSmOL
8964 copyright protection279PENANAfOvkaoXiRY 維尼
「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection279PENANASD3EtjiJK1 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAEWtTKckc7j
8964 copyright protection279PENANAQAymF73aRE 維尼
(塑造人物反差,進一步吸引讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAxqt4NpvhKd 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANABWvdczg02X
8964 copyright protection279PENANAghPADStnsv 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAk3NJ53Oei0
8964 copyright protection279PENANADjkCpqGeqh 維尼
「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAJ0Vcr74gzP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAyXEWP7V063
8964 copyright protection279PENANAwFxnplroKn 維尼
「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection279PENANADBnOeCB5dP 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAs2w1b4u86h
8964 copyright protection279PENANAB5OFyyOkkg 維尼
(運用對話與行為態度塑造人物形象。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAexXutWsWnl 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAjoZA0mQznK
8964 copyright protection279PENANAd4Zk7cv3v6 維尼
因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection279PENANAfJ3B8LZkie 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAyhqWFfE1jk
8964 copyright protection279PENANAA2ZwTDRyD6 維尼
然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection279PENANA4Tt06EHGNr 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAIIBRPXNeIM
8964 copyright protection279PENANAMjbuwYyB2W 維尼
(切換到男主角視角。反正肯定會度過危機,這邊就直接告訴評審跟讀者結果。)8964 copyright protection279PENANArWHBvWgcoo 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAd2FxPqMvPa
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection279PENANANmfwBSe6lE 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAWbRuITodTQ
8964 copyright protection279PENANAz1BpQVkc8q 維尼
(描述男主角的行動,卻遭到未知人物的阻撓。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAPKi59uFrOU 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAuEMB3I0Oki
8964 copyright protection279PENANA0ho0tw8y2N 維尼
不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection279PENANAUB86i5lI4q 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA72f5rmrQwO
8964 copyright protection279PENANA6Bx4B1ptSe 維尼
(具體描繪出場景,講述這個危機實際上是什麼情況。)8964 copyright protection279PENANA8pvrKEwjkI 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAiNXTeQ5PNC
8964 copyright protection279PENANAJKbOG3uG12 維尼
千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection279PENANAQom4BijWKD 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAxyOO8lyyj3
8964 copyright protection279PENANANmaBzsqaaf 維尼
(講出事情的結果,但不告訴讀者是怎麼解決的,這樣讀者就能自己翻書。而後面一句則是這個事件帶來的結果,則是告訴評審有好好讓該事件落幕。)8964 copyright protection279PENANApb5HPeOpUH 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANASWihMVvbp4
8964 copyright protection279PENANAG6KZdzInU7 維尼
然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection279PENANA7XMc7BGsgK 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA1cMqYy76Pv
8964 copyright protection279PENANAYiDDeAfmsX 維尼
(描述新的衝突。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAyHURAwJ6Ch 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAGq8fYofgYs
8964 copyright protection279PENANAgGB2SRIxJB 維尼
「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection279PENANAXN2eo47jcB 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA38Jyoh7QmW
8964 copyright protection279PENANAgGaGr8HblX 維尼
(運用對話句貼近讀者,並塑造男主角的形象。)8964 copyright protection279PENANArl3D058f9X 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAtRUlK7eZgA
8964 copyright protection279PENANAbrWhCtNsYW 維尼
面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection279PENANAJF8TfVR02K 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAMquJaO4pcQ
8964 copyright protection279PENANA5TEZv86Rs4 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection279PENANAs3JvUNTKZY 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA2MYDIk6OMH
8964 copyright protection279PENANAFg0zekDZxB 維尼
(描述動機,以及他所面對的挑戰。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAFj8YAuenrY 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAYhERxGHfMg
8964 copyright protection279PENANAc4LopsVkaT 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection279PENANANOCE2jfNqk 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAAGNgAM0aNN
8964 copyright protection279PENANAUTJuz9tf4w 維尼
(帶出男主角因為邂逅了女主角而有所轉變。也告訴評審你知道要讓人物產生變化。)8964 copyright protection279PENANALcJ3KDKdoB 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANANvKIFtB7Qi
8964 copyright protection279PENANAkGDE8fQkuP 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection279PENANAl5DAP71bAq 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA5Srh55wXgb
8964 copyright protection279PENANArcQtnZLTgr 維尼
(點出新的危機。用實際的情境,以及男主的狀況帶出來。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAgCOitbLfuA 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA9Nyp7CvG6z
8964 copyright protection279PENANAlpVnjMnthy 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection279PENANAA37FuXDrjk 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAXGoSy5FPTd
8964 copyright protection279PENANArcpqTtgYDh 維尼
(讀者原以為只要助手幫忙就能輕鬆解決,但是──)8964 copyright protection279PENANAuyW9DZ0xbK 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA8XrTJ1pIJH
8964 copyright protection279PENANAn7A8V8xIec 維尼
「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection279PENANA4kk8OGvKfW 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANA82QqBCFEqi
8964 copyright protection279PENANASoELOsVOqF 維尼
(這個方案卻直接遭到否定,勾起讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAQ5QC0GHHEs 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANASRvjZrYjO7
8964 copyright protection279PENANA9p40fYhsay 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection279PENANAPCPrLhHlTo 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAulvieuxyIj
8964 copyright protection279PENANAMjYJkU23Wa 維尼
(正面講述實際面對的困難,並帶出女主角行為的動機,接著說明事情還有轉機。而後面會是個怎樣的劇情解法,就要讀者實際翻書。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAPL385Yuiae 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAd6gn46jDid
8964 copyright protection279PENANAFfgQ98kXtC 維尼
漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection279PENANAcwMW0hj0EM 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAX9FMM3bQRC
8964 copyright protection279PENANAeKNPzpO2lS 維尼
(稍微寫一下本作的要素,並且用最簡單的方式概述一下人物。)8964 copyright protection279PENANAJ9dWYuMdXz 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAp7HTKjgcWk
8964 copyright protection279PENANAZdiUx6aN5F 維尼
差不多就是這個感覺。8964 copyright protection279PENANASSpphD0AuO 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAP3avLLmjmT
8964 copyright protection279PENANATotZ8eM3GF 維尼
下面則是稍微整理一下重點,以及應該注意哪些地方。8964 copyright protection279PENANAzIIFczcUAe 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAS4zbqiXA91
8964 copyright protection279PENANAzDXLUcBizR 維尼
1.要點出這個故事的主線,讓大家知道這是個怎樣的故事。8964 copyright protection279PENANAotvywd0FEx 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAbz1LeWuAft
8964 copyright protection279PENANAy1ZedDsoE3 維尼
2.交代人物的動機,以及想要達成的目標,拉出故事主軸。8964 copyright protection279PENANAVRkFgoLjPw 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAuDjcRDBJH9
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3.利用對話句能塑造人物形象,展示出他的性格。有對白演出會更加生動。8964 copyright protection279PENANAaSlE7bMcaB 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAZaZbydTIqj
8964 copyright protection279PENANAxSyH4zIXpj 維尼
4.藉著角色的內心描述能貼近讀者,讓人產生共鳴。8964 copyright protection279PENANAAzYizRaWY1 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANANGhf6Yh8iG
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5.描述出劇情轉折。挑重點寫。8964 copyright protection279PENANAMmnOW1DPUR 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAwOK4IsTaNi
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6.講出故事的衝突,拋出問題,但故意不寫劇情解法。8964 copyright protection279PENANAtetViM6uUA 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANALat63cMXdT
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7.盡量用具體的文字呈現,無論是外觀或者環境描述,且不要講廢話。8964 copyright protection279PENANAZjdsQr9DRJ 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAGYiVCuv204
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這邊舉例一下什麼是廢話:8964 copyright protection279PENANAnS9rKNSKOa 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAizW2haY5Tr
8964 copyright protection279PENANAwSwUUBVLqA 維尼
在這種情況下,男主到底該怎麼辦呢?8964 copyright protection279PENANAWcjeFcySkI 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAPS5oKvasDq
8964 copyright protection279PENANApyPYjmsApK 維尼
──這句對讀者來說一點用也沒有,完全沒有帶來新的資訊,有寫等於沒寫,就是個垃圾句子。一看就可以知道這人不會寫簡介。8964 copyright protection279PENANAqbtMTQL9gY 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAChC0p9HLtZ
8964 copyright protection279PENANAeMsVL3QBdW 維尼
簡介就是廣告,寫廢話等於浪費篇幅。能在重要地方浪費篇幅的人,不是不得要領,就是個不懂得自我學習的人,這種人的作品我完全不想看。8964 copyright protection279PENANAc75Kr1pszd 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAwZN84OfLY6
8964 copyright protection279PENANAq8r3ru2RSX 維尼
8.在撰寫簡介的同時,要表現出「想讓拿起這本書的人想讀讀看」的熱情。8964 copyright protection279PENANAzDeO3uFyNe 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAFdTMwhjlno
8964 copyright protection279PENANAZoFUJ2bAcB 維尼
9.懂得用反差來吸引讀者。8964 copyright protection279PENANArXyz9MC9kl 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAiDQwrIClMJ
8964 copyright protection279PENANAjWFvjbIeHX 維尼
10.讓讀者對於事件鋪陳有第一時間的想法,接著告訴他這種方法行不通。8964 copyright protection279PENANAX4derWtica 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAf5YlUVE2Zs
8964 copyright protection279PENANAAb2w2bOr2q 維尼
11.知道自己作品的賣點,並且帶出讀者應該會獲得的體驗,也就是「預計能從這本書得到什麼樂趣」。8964 copyright protection279PENANA309Qsl1bPY 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAB91jy3zCwe
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舉例:跟女主角的約會事件會吸引讀者,所以寫簡介就最好提一下,你可以寫一句「為了克服害怕跟人互動的症狀,我跟她一起去了遊樂園,意外體驗到了夏日氣氛」,類似這種句子,當然順勢加入劇情衝突會比較完整,像是「然而,正當我們的關係即將更進一步時,過去背叛她的朋友卻出現在我們的面前」,大概是這種感覺。8964 copyright protection279PENANAGQ0TYYoRNX 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANArnBf3txHks
8964 copyright protection279PENANAjmIaZNjhde 維尼
其他還有很多,想一想這本書會有什麼能讓讀者期待的地方。就寫進簡介裡面。這樣讀者想要感受這個體驗就會想買書。8964 copyright protection279PENANA0i2IzNB8a4 維尼
283Please respect copyright.PENANAl72a8YaZ3U
8964 copyright protection279PENANAd4xT8sWUYO 維尼
基本上,不同的篇幅,不同的故事,對於簡介都會有一些各自的寫法,但核心概念就是要做為廣告,能吸引人去讀。8964 copyright protection279PENANAuS4vETJZyQ 維尼
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12.除了從上述的例子抓一下感覺,其實最好還是找一些自己認為吸引人的簡介來臨摹,學習他人優秀的地方。8964 copyright protection279PENANASnFGiOxKDm 維尼
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不同的作品呈現方式都會有所不同。8964 copyright protection279PENANAUrvYtiOE8T 維尼
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簡介是一門技術。如果能寫出吸引人觀看故事的簡介,那就代表你具有明白自己作品的賣點、控制要透露多少資訊量,掌控自己文字的能力、當然也包含呈現出作者是否有自我學習的習慣,還有灌注多少熱情在這部作品上,表達究竟有多想要眼前的人讀讀看這部作品的心情。8964 copyright protection279PENANAH4U7nRjVhA 維尼
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就連沒有天分的我都學到能侃侃而談,相信很多人也是能辦到的。8964 copyright protection279PENANAsGtqmHE3Tj 維尼
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拜託有愛就多動腦。努力提升自己。這樣投入的心血和態度是會反映在作品上的。8964 copyright protection279PENANAVapCFLJHZo 維尼
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要讓大家看看你究竟多認真。而你自己又是對自己有多認真。8964 copyright protection279PENANATFWNs1HeKs 維尼
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在這塊土地上,這種認真的笨蛋愈多,肯定會為產業帶來一陣嶄新之風。8964 copyright protection279PENANA7Nzd7JPUhG 維尼
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我還有很多需要學習的地方。寫這篇文章也是為了能見到更多厲害的對手出現,然後我會成為在這之中的第一。8964 copyright protection279PENANA1ixFa6hFXF 維尼
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同時,我也在追逐自己心中的第一。8964 copyright protection279PENANAM6W7zGH8Ge 維尼
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那樣的人我想才是真正的創作者吧。8964 copyright protection279PENANAOcxJNxwwTp 維尼
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祝福大家。8964 copyright protection279PENANA8Dl0Gn2uMn 維尼
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最後放上三部作品的連結,大家有空能稍微看一看。8964 copyright protection279PENANADVpzXiKTtY 維尼
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