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在書店拿起書時,我總是感到十分羞恥。8964 copyright protection176PENANArlZOE9hzHD 維尼
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臺灣本地的書跟日本過來的翻譯書,光是簡介就能看出水準的差異。8964 copyright protection176PENANApoIIXCPkEa 維尼
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我們缺乏良好的閱讀風氣,以及自學的動力和管道,這樣的結果就反映在產業上、乃至於作品當中。8964 copyright protection176PENANAx69GVJQi5G 維尼
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在日本,書背的簡介、或者書腰的宣傳詞可能是由該書作者,或者由該作責編撰寫;而臺灣應該也是這樣。8964 copyright protection176PENANAeA7FI9Ou0F 維尼
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光以簡介而言,則可以分成兩邊敘述。8964 copyright protection176PENANAgcMGkGJon0 維尼
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倘若是由編輯所寫,代表我們的編輯不懂得怎麼推書,畢竟在這個產業當中,編輯基本上都過著血汗勞工一般的日子,我認為這確實情有可原。8964 copyright protection176PENANAE0B1l1msQ5 維尼
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日本編輯的薪資水準應該比較高,那相對能找到的人也會程度好一點。8964 copyright protection176PENANAI2SGZ3EWZL 維尼
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至於臺灣,以現在的薪資狀況而言基本上都是用真愛在做事,薪水也就那個樣子,實在不好意思要求人家,畢竟多做事錢也不會變多。8964 copyright protection176PENANATIkzTEH8UR 維尼
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當然,這些都是我蒐集各種網站的資訊,不一定完全正確就是了。8964 copyright protection176PENANAmdMeEyeaCC 維尼
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至於另一邊,倘若是由該書作者所寫,那代表問題就相當嚴重。8964 copyright protection176PENANAr2J1dl37z2 維尼
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而進一步來說,這個可能性還相當大。8964 copyright protection176PENANA7nrlzqjFu6 維尼
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畢竟編輯有很多事情要忙,把簡介這種東西交給作者本人操刀也不足為奇。8964 copyright protection176PENANA78MsvTjkbV 維尼
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而在這種時候,若是市面上多是那個樣子的簡介,就代表作者也就是那樣。8964 copyright protection176PENANAtoH7HA70HN 維尼
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我時常因為封面插圖而拿起書,看了下背後的簡介就放下書。8964 copyright protection176PENANAyJtJ6N28Ji 維尼
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光看簡介就覺得可以不用看。8964 copyright protection176PENANA7IuLi1p9Ug 維尼
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儘管不排除有那種正文寫得好,但不太會寫簡介的作者存在,但基本上能寫出好簡介,正文也寫得好的作者機率出現更高一點。8964 copyright protection176PENANAvqVe56RO9C 維尼
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簡介是廣告,利用那僅有的篇幅向大家說「請把我買回家吧」,這種珍貴的宣傳機會應該要好好把握。8964 copyright protection176PENANAeCkn7K7DxW 維尼
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以下的文章,則是要如何撰寫簡介的分享。像是有哪些值得注意的事情,也會用實際的例子來展示。而這些內容,都是我自己學習整理而來,僅供大家參考。8964 copyright protection176PENANALVntp3dhFa 維尼
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另外,文章中所用來舉例的簡介,都是由我自行撰寫,當然,有應用到他人作品當作範例的地方,我撰寫的簡介已經徵求到作者同意,得以在此發表。而這邊也感謝 VIA 和伍德·瓦懷特,因為有你們兩位,這個文章才得以成篇。8964 copyright protection176PENANA63FsnDraSa 維尼
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額外補充一點,上述對於產業的各種心得,都是出自我個人的意見,跟兩位作者無關,望知悉。8964 copyright protection176PENANAiwVhilQyBL 維尼
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那麼,接下來我們正式開始吧。8964 copyright protection176PENANAXCC32jUw9r 維尼
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首先,第一步要搞清楚「簡介」和「大綱」的區別。8964 copyright protection176PENANA6xMDRvAFmM 維尼
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這兩者的區別是「受眾」,也就是「寫給誰看的」。8964 copyright protection176PENANAfHpTw4kjNx 維尼
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以簡介而言,簡單來說就是廣告,是寫給「買書的讀者」,以及沒看過這本書,「你想吸引他來讀的人」。8964 copyright protection176PENANAMp0PICJwFY 維尼
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而大綱,則是寫給「編輯」或者「自己」看的,用來整理劇情脈絡、告訴編輯這部作品的設計圖,展現作品的價值。8964 copyright protection176PENANAnxDfLrHPhl 維尼
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在撰寫簡介和大綱時,呈現的手法會有不同。簡介是透過一些方法吸引人來看,大綱則是作者本人的紀錄,以及用簡單的方式告訴編輯這個故事到底發生什麼事,看出版社要不要用。8964 copyright protection176PENANAs1DEry0Pc5 維尼
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因此,簡介必須要吊人胃口,大綱則是愈清楚簡單愈好。在這一部分,就得提到所謂的資訊量。8964 copyright protection176PENANAY9daXZM2hn 維尼
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在你的故事當中,什麼東西是能作為吸引,能直接寫在簡介上的,又有什麼是不需要寫出來的,要自己思考分辨。8964 copyright protection176PENANAxyYq8GwiBH 維尼
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如果是直接用文字說明的,應該不太好懂,以下則進入舉例環節。8964 copyright protection176PENANA8fMOFM4v2V 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection176PENANAchahE9YE9X 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection176PENANAfsqrDIk2Ac 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection176PENANAULyBWLNLY4 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection176PENANA6QnHVe8g52 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection176PENANAMp4yjhVUyH 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAnzc8PR0xkT 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection176PENANAI2BIARIdPd 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection176PENANAyefUCtCveD 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAOJec8v7IYm 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection176PENANAQ6nrm0ee0q 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection176PENANAbRmKMvdeHP 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAu68W3e3DiF 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAO5GiZRG2cl 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection176PENANAk8PSy9bTUs 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection176PENANAixRc1iYVMP 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection176PENANAV0n0Rb0yEY 維尼
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在上述的簡介文字中,有很多是我沒有交代的。8964 copyright protection176PENANA1Ib0A2BsJw 維尼
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包括男主角賀輔的能力,以及故事碰上怎樣的麻煩,前者是因為這是故事比較核心的設定之一,後者則是受限於篇幅,因此就簡單提一下,引起讀者的好奇。8964 copyright protection176PENANAgdib0NWDXU 維尼
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而我有交代的資訊,包含:介紹男女主角大致的性格、兩人相處的方式、稍微介紹他們擁有怎樣的背景,有偵探要素,因此選擇提到偵探事務所,至於房租部分,則是表示他們行動的動機與目的,代表他們是為了賺錢而展開活動。8964 copyright protection176PENANAG5zHTsfKlG 維尼
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這邊先提一個重點,依照簡介所擁有的篇幅多寡,來決定文字的重點和想要透漏的資訊量。8964 copyright protection176PENANAIiWspNN0gu 維尼
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以這一篇而言,因為我不打算寫太長,當初我鎖定的重點,就放在如何呈現本作具有魅力的「輕鬆的氛圍」上,而透過角色的對話互動,就是個最直接的表達方式,這麼做還能直接套用原作中出現的句子,也不太會離題。8964 copyright protection176PENANANOxFAzc9oK 維尼
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下面再舉個例子。8964 copyright protection176PENANAsuqGtaQhmY 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection176PENANAzIoEKLKKyO 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection176PENANAvoR1ikLxqY 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection176PENANAHIAhnypP7B 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection176PENANAZh7yCwQwJT 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection176PENANACCR3ormrwd 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection176PENANAFC8XwVMoRl 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection176PENANAhz56Dl8mup 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection176PENANAYRtAjyQu4t 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection176PENANASJo63Rir0v 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection176PENANAKZepW8fqfv 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection176PENANAyoYz0qI1BY 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection176PENANAjer8qWziaY 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection176PENANARyv6xgFJVm 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAxC87wNnnyQ 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection176PENANAEjGANl1pbx 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection176PENANAjgrWD38xrs 維尼
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本作屬於近未來的運動作品,在這個簡介當中,我有交代的資訊包括:提一下本作核心的運動項目、介紹男主角是個學生、他所面對的第一個衝突,也就是有女生寄情書給他、介紹女主角、並且帶出本作的主線,亦即在比賽中奪下優勝這個目標。8964 copyright protection176PENANA82zqGZCg7m 維尼
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至於我沒交代的資訊包含:有哪些重要事件、對手角色、訓練內容等等。8964 copyright protection176PENANAuHb2j96KMW 維尼
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這也是受限於篇幅的關係。而這個簡介所採取的策略是,將第一個最讓人感到期待的衝突點拋出來,並且順勢用對話句刻劃角色。畢竟拿起這本書的人,肯定知道男女主會參加比賽,只是「因為什麼契機」參賽,用這樣的場景來吸引讀者翻閱正文。8964 copyright protection176PENANAEB3HF2LUvZ 維尼
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這些是關於策略與資訊量的說明。8964 copyright protection176PENANAqJSGabtLeO 維尼
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下面我們更進一步來談細節。8964 copyright protection176PENANAJSqkSqUFOg 維尼
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我會用簡介中筆記的方式,來告訴大家一些重點。8964 copyright protection176PENANAFLoc6COmlA 維尼
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這邊直接把第一篇複製來用。8964 copyright protection176PENANAlyQBoKDuAx 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection176PENANADUSG9JDPlF 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection176PENANAunM1GXjfY2 維尼
(描述故事的背景,發生在什麼地方。用偵探事務所這個實際的建築物,能讓讀者產生畫面。提到積欠房租是這是置入引人好奇的點,也順便帶入角色。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAxeBQ3ExD6F 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection176PENANATZttBNWbrM 維尼
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(用對話句塑造角色。選用這句話是為了順便帶入男主角賀輔的名字。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAyFVXwY7YrY 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection176PENANA0kasHxTrvh 維尼
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(塑造男主角的人物性格。同時這也是原作中優秀的點,關於人物設計很優秀,相當貼近人心。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAKrmYkmcqgG 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAlAvwVC2SHq 維尼
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(跟讀者透露兩人的關係,以及交代男主角會做出什麼事,藉此塑造角色。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA2XB57qSiHR 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection176PENANAdlVBvNviNg 維尼
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(由於只有對話句會顯得抽象,因此這邊用描述句介紹人物外觀,讓讀者產生畫面。也交代兩人當下的動作。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA4vqFsWOYUk 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection176PENANAiGMccm9eQJ 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection176PENANABF8k5dqPYz 維尼
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(前面是間接透漏兩人的關係,這邊是直接提到。而這邊也更進一步交代本作有趣的地方,鮮活的對話。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAfYjbxzti7I 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection176PENANALvm72K1h11 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection176PENANAw4Evf1tu3Q 維尼
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(說明兩人展開行動的動機,下一句則是用具體的動作和地點讓讀者產生畫面。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAlqIwqckZxq 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAUbw41FxZlI 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAWXlTeVcHlI 維尼
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(這邊的對話原本就很貼近人心,所以我就直接放過來。算是簡介中的主要亮點。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAHYCQz1uSuO 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection176PENANAJ9vyZya7sQ 維尼
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(帶入事件發生,用婦人點出委託者的身分,並引讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAseu7eEAbZW 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection176PENANAttd2Tz7iSb 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection176PENANANoVs0Z3yJo 維尼
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(基於篇幅考量,我並沒有寫太多推理或冒險的要素,只是稍微概括一下他們有麻煩上門,讓讀者產生興趣。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAYYLPtfadoi 維尼
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接著則是第二篇的複製。8964 copyright protection176PENANA7J92Ps2kwt 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection176PENANAS1AwKUoDYu 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection176PENANAom3jTOc9Q0 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection176PENANAaklqQUbywY 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection176PENANAEguvbe5NWs 維尼
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(直接介紹本作核心運動項目。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAnOTLPheRkJ 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection176PENANACxrFOAeaPP 維尼
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(交代主角是誰,有什麼人物背景。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAOPx6gF7nUO 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection176PENANABPfVdzYhvN 維尼
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(描述第一個衝突發生。吸引讀者目光。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAtypD5oGCX1 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection176PENANAqdM16Gkj6A 維尼
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(點名重要場景的地點,並且帶入女主角。先描述外觀與年紀,讓讀者有初步印象。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAJbHpk39pV9 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection176PENANAdpQjCSZUOd 維尼
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(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAEOdyrONVfK 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection176PENANAYPCufOqMKO 維尼
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(描繪女主角當下的表情與動作,用美少女來讓讀者讀下去。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAPrPQTDVxiD 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection176PENANAnajhgQqIZo 維尼
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(利用男主角的內心描述,貼近跟讀者的距離。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAFLteMs8j8A 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection176PENANAZ4oyVRhBQj 維尼
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(承上,上面是直接用對話句道出當下瞬間的反應,後面則是男主角意識到自己的反應。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAboDTrIyvyC 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection176PENANAcoNM4ZC0SO 維尼
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(告訴讀者有事情即將發生,將描述重點放到女主角身上。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAcd8TNnGMHa 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection176PENANAPrQcVAHFT7 維尼
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(原來不是告白啊,像這樣出乎讀者意料,同時也讓讀者感到對後續故事的好奇。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA9SSU8AnfRT 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection176PENANACZMQuRbZ0L 維尼
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(闡明男主的背景與反差,以及女主角所朝向的目標,關於兩人邂逅所展開的故事。)8964 copyright protection176PENANArb8sE8qyNz 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection176PENANAuKdh6ginzv 維尼
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(最後再次強化本作的主線,要在運動比賽中奪勝這件事。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAht7Z8HtBKk 維尼
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以上兩段簡介都屬於短的簡介,而倘若有更多文字運用,就能寫長簡介。8964 copyright protection176PENANAT9arwSgEHV 維尼
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而這種就能交代更多資訊與衝突,也多半會被運用在參賽文章的簡介,也就是所謂的「大綱式簡介」。8964 copyright protection176PENANA8DIocvVFYs 維尼
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大綱是給評審與編輯看的,需要清楚交代事件轉折,讓評審知道你有將轉折與結構安排在故事當中,同時也能讀出你是否了解本作的賣點,以及能讓他們推廣的方向。8964 copyright protection176PENANARc0Jgs2CDx 維尼
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簡介則是寫給讀者看的,需要交代出衝突,但又不能寫得太多,這樣就不會想實際閱讀故事了。8964 copyright protection176PENANAiwzXPUlzEx 維尼
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所以,為了滿足這種兩邊都要的狀況,比賽文章才會多採用「大綱式簡介」8964 copyright protection176PENANAWz4cM4tr6d 維尼
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下面的故事是由我撰寫,但因為是舊作,在結構上並不是太過穩固,但還是能給大家作為參考。8964 copyright protection176PENANAH2vZrQkLm8 維尼
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection176PENANAWowd4P9xuN 維尼
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection176PENANAE4MItFzxIx 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection176PENANANNdylV0cvv 維尼
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曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection176PENANA0u4bhtgtkm 維尼
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遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection176PENANAmXgDQTYrp7 維尼
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升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection176PENANAocFdKlqPgs 維尼
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection176PENANAfjRE50zAba 維尼
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她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection176PENANAaxBp70evGt 維尼
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「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAvuVrSLXnEx 維尼
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「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAYvALYoIqMI 維尼
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAjEiOI1oBgP 維尼
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因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection176PENANAJLwRra8g8x 維尼
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然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection176PENANAkoAeDAnBLb 維尼
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection176PENANABXab5SJczc 維尼
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不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection176PENANAKDWWJmhjUF 維尼
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千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection176PENANAaenUoHiHoa 維尼
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然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection176PENANA694jnjIv5F 維尼
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「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection176PENANASOqJ7sYNci 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAraopQkU5kj
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面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection176PENANAoQuTehDYDc 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAiBF4Ae1NjF
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擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection176PENANAqoVByLRs4E 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA5LvjlL1hE3
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在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection176PENANAo89y7N8wCH 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAcykScdP8Eo
8964 copyright protection176PENANAMrpW4MiSmC 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection176PENANArIRTmHRFXs 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAHMBE0umMwY
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此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection176PENANAGKa8AHkouT 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAVFbGBBGdy9
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「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAWPrdragSPk 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAgGsgvlztWG
8964 copyright protection176PENANAeG2A6EeDqa 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection176PENANA39XvN0r31Y 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANATWEvDepv0t
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漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection176PENANAeZA2QuOMzk 維尼
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先給大家讀過一遍,下面則是一樣用實際解說:8964 copyright protection176PENANAsdJyKkhSQF 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA19zwl1XjO8
8964 copyright protection176PENANA3uZEs5lSOV 維尼
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180Please respect copyright.PENANAzHkwjwR7FX
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection176PENANAPt7TeLujUK 維尼
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection176PENANAxdCbpGJT6o 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANArjwOtir8jx
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簡介:8964 copyright protection176PENANAT5mFOYSQwR 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAiDi7dUBF9N
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曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection176PENANANhjrl0Z5yS 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAMvMnuj3xqp
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(點出主角,交代其人物背景。交代事件起因,且用實際場景來描繪畫面。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA5awoZw7WlU 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA0E8uoSWDOF
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遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection176PENANAYD6VyWTH2V 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANADiiA6S8ibM
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(明確地講述其目標。也就是本作的核心。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA2qmfLJMdqD 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAIaxxBwW79R
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升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection176PENANA3XTC5iZNhP 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAKzMuo4NwZW
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(交代人物的身分,以及間接透露年齡。帶出第一個發生的衝突。勾起讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAKnRObFgtpa 維尼
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection176PENANAjpiw55ruVC 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAkubNSUq6Sm
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(讓讀者出乎意料。並且導入女主角。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAp1rcEO08M7 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA9z8P0iclkC
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她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection176PENANASbsW8CdPnC 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA69u4e1s8RU
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(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAOnk24I7F0F 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANATO2EEJIla9
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「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection176PENANALYE22AjLww 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAZg4wOq2Q1M
8964 copyright protection176PENANAPwMbOYPZAO 維尼
(塑造人物反差,進一步吸引讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAL8CkWLeMVA 維尼
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「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAdWWTVZR0vY 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANARhuyrOGkpu
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAF8bkLf88KX 維尼
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8964 copyright protection176PENANAtxy4sZulGV 維尼
(運用對話與行為態度塑造人物形象。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAvG51KrATDv 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANACcZ2wUWtKO
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因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection176PENANAmsHpX85Y1y 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAazdO6qRFrc
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然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection176PENANARZQfKbvegD 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANARfHyi9lr7q
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(切換到男主角視角。反正肯定會度過危機,這邊就直接告訴評審跟讀者結果。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAY3IIkX5FYk 維尼
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection176PENANAqpJBVDzi4M 維尼
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(描述男主角的行動,卻遭到未知人物的阻撓。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAnSBo3AHFaa 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAm81VQDNIa8
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不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection176PENANAkDKdaEyWvU 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAsWQqkY1d47
8964 copyright protection176PENANA6ggpqrYHO7 維尼
(具體描繪出場景,講述這個危機實際上是什麼情況。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAsieYAsBmjW 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA8aP4k9sut0
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千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection176PENANAS26pNwDBNx 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANALbIYdrm2GD
8964 copyright protection176PENANA4LZBUqxgOE 維尼
(講出事情的結果,但不告訴讀者是怎麼解決的,這樣讀者就能自己翻書。而後面一句則是這個事件帶來的結果,則是告訴評審有好好讓該事件落幕。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA4PeoN1Q0HN 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANArgjH6Kf6y5
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然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection176PENANARdyWrxSqF9 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAuohupUZCz1
8964 copyright protection176PENANAEsAfQCu1r6 維尼
(描述新的衝突。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAhv0beVUC8W 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAyGIgeojTSL
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「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection176PENANAuiU0SWDRZD 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAPfKU5Ik3Lx
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(運用對話句貼近讀者,並塑造男主角的形象。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAdv4p1WWPxe 維尼
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面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection176PENANATVPOMenAcY 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAYP2URRipyF
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擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection176PENANADK0dI0f67Q 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA7iVFtnmJ5o
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(描述動機,以及他所面對的挑戰。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAZH80NXcOVO 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAD7YLgfewYL
8964 copyright protection176PENANAd1OfoQeAhj 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection176PENANAHiQ1QxbB8v 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANANlk2XENPni
8964 copyright protection176PENANAHnvZj0Z8nJ 維尼
(帶出男主角因為邂逅了女主角而有所轉變。也告訴評審你知道要讓人物產生變化。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAz9lGl04nVv 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANASnpD8FVGZ4
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時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection176PENANAKSblHcltCN 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAqAPDJhBZ2o
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(點出新的危機。用實際的情境,以及男主的狀況帶出來。)8964 copyright protection176PENANADeh82lEQDf 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA0swGZx3cOT
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此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection176PENANAlUb3sjELNz 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAQAkrHVxee6
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(讀者原以為只要助手幫忙就能輕鬆解決,但是──)8964 copyright protection176PENANASkaOsytBy4 維尼
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「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection176PENANApabP1Hapl0 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANASsBM96AlaU
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(這個方案卻直接遭到否定,勾起讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAfdDY19aYhc 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANALbqHdUqU03
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責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection176PENANA7fFL5eTUii 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAeuwcYrSJHS
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(正面講述實際面對的困難,並帶出女主角行為的動機,接著說明事情還有轉機。而後面會是個怎樣的劇情解法,就要讀者實際翻書。)8964 copyright protection176PENANAVmPIFttSKv 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANA1plNtHrGGx
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漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection176PENANAQ20DrE6JP4 維尼
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(稍微寫一下本作的要素,並且用最簡單的方式概述一下人物。)8964 copyright protection176PENANA6zqeivchZh 維尼
180Please respect copyright.PENANAjTRB5V57TT
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差不多就是這個感覺。8964 copyright protection176PENANAb6ALaEdywu 維尼
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下面則是稍微整理一下重點,以及應該注意哪些地方。8964 copyright protection176PENANADZ27T401Wi 維尼
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1.要點出這個故事的主線,讓大家知道這是個怎樣的故事。8964 copyright protection176PENANAK33sMOLbW2 維尼
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2.交代人物的動機,以及想要達成的目標,拉出故事主軸。8964 copyright protection176PENANAAMiSWXGrl0 維尼
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3.利用對話句能塑造人物形象,展示出他的性格。有對白演出會更加生動。8964 copyright protection176PENANARzbuvICoTy 維尼
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4.藉著角色的內心描述能貼近讀者,讓人產生共鳴。8964 copyright protection176PENANAok1K6dayhU 維尼
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5.描述出劇情轉折。挑重點寫。8964 copyright protection176PENANA8yUl6gPhVv 維尼
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6.講出故事的衝突,拋出問題,但故意不寫劇情解法。8964 copyright protection176PENANA0fy9jeNiCy 維尼
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7.盡量用具體的文字呈現,無論是外觀或者環境描述,且不要講廢話。8964 copyright protection176PENANAJnSxL3uV6Q 維尼
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這邊舉例一下什麼是廢話:8964 copyright protection176PENANAge8P3hhctO 維尼
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在這種情況下,男主到底該怎麼辦呢?8964 copyright protection176PENANAxEl03lDZdm 維尼
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──這句對讀者來說一點用也沒有,完全沒有帶來新的資訊,有寫等於沒寫,就是個垃圾句子。一看就可以知道這人不會寫簡介。8964 copyright protection176PENANAiwPLyVeMvQ 維尼
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簡介就是廣告,寫廢話等於浪費篇幅。能在重要地方浪費篇幅的人,不是不得要領,就是個不懂得自我學習的人,這種人的作品我完全不想看。8964 copyright protection176PENANAhg4C7M6tqg 維尼
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8.在撰寫簡介的同時,要表現出「想讓拿起這本書的人想讀讀看」的熱情。8964 copyright protection176PENANAFqLgqrDnYn 維尼
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9.懂得用反差來吸引讀者。8964 copyright protection176PENANAcZX554B3Vz 維尼
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10.讓讀者對於事件鋪陳有第一時間的想法,接著告訴他這種方法行不通。8964 copyright protection176PENANAo947J7RoHt 維尼
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11.知道自己作品的賣點,並且帶出讀者應該會獲得的體驗,也就是「預計能從這本書得到什麼樂趣」。8964 copyright protection176PENANAQ4SVnbGXft 維尼
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舉例:跟女主角的約會事件會吸引讀者,所以寫簡介就最好提一下,你可以寫一句「為了克服害怕跟人互動的症狀,我跟她一起去了遊樂園,意外體驗到了夏日氣氛」,類似這種句子,當然順勢加入劇情衝突會比較完整,像是「然而,正當我們的關係即將更進一步時,過去背叛她的朋友卻出現在我們的面前」,大概是這種感覺。8964 copyright protection176PENANACIOvT5TtcD 維尼
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其他還有很多,想一想這本書會有什麼能讓讀者期待的地方。就寫進簡介裡面。這樣讀者想要感受這個體驗就會想買書。8964 copyright protection176PENANAkBEn7CxW0U 維尼
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基本上,不同的篇幅,不同的故事,對於簡介都會有一些各自的寫法,但核心概念就是要做為廣告,能吸引人去讀。8964 copyright protection176PENANAaID9FZR18z 維尼
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12.除了從上述的例子抓一下感覺,其實最好還是找一些自己認為吸引人的簡介來臨摹,學習他人優秀的地方。8964 copyright protection176PENANAkipJvj5PQf 維尼
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簡介是一門技術。如果能寫出吸引人觀看故事的簡介,那就代表你具有明白自己作品的賣點、控制要透露多少資訊量,掌控自己文字的能力、當然也包含呈現出作者是否有自我學習的習慣,還有灌注多少熱情在這部作品上,表達究竟有多想要眼前的人讀讀看這部作品的心情。8964 copyright protection176PENANAEticwCHnS7 維尼
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