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《倚聲part4臨江仙》
ENTRY #5
Author: 迷蝶
Published:
Oct 30, 2016
《倚聲part4臨江仙》
Published:
Oct 30, 2016
ENTRY #5
臨江仙-憶傷
Author: 迷蝶
Published:
Oct 30, 2016
1 Min Read
189 Words
No Plagiarism!rCXExepSWM1cQmIwZ1Qxposted on PＥNAＮＡ

赤血沙河煙起霧，鑼聲戰馬響雲霄。

英雄斷劍下孤魂。

熟聞知曉淚，飲酒憶當年。

父母日年終期盼，佳人日日淚如霜。

滄桑歲月如白。

回頭少年妄，撒手故雲煙。

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以壯年出去打仗，鮮血滲進沙飄向空中，鼓聲馬蹄聲震響大地。自己的好友死在戰場，誰又能知道我的血淚?只能喝酒想起當年事，父母日日夜夜期盼歸來，佳人天天獨自落下淚。時光快速流失，自己也滿歲月的痕跡，再回想年輕的狂妄，也只能慢慢跟老友在另一個世界相聚。

希望各位小編大大喜歡…

第一次嘗試古詩句。=>=

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