No Plagiarism!0IIbL38dq4jWPeCa9Il3posted on PENANA 結果仙米寫完彼岸依舊很不安心,所以已經想動手改開頭了,畢竟看起來真的很不怎麼樣,沒有吸引力,又臭又冗的傳說和描寫,沒人會想往下看。8964 copyright protection143PENANA6AIy18J1ks 維尼
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不過刪掉那段無常殿的描寫,整本小說基本上沒什麼描寫了哈哈哈哈(*゚∀゚)8964 copyright protection143PENANAUZOIqgwoyo 維尼
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會不會寫一寫又有新的問題(._.)8964 copyright protection143PENANAdNgL7hzMkL 維尼
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今天好像沒發生什麼事,也算是好事,照片是舉哥帶我去吃的豬排,哈哈。8964 copyright protection143PENANAl5o6ZaHgSX 維尼
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不——好無聊啊啊啊啊——!!!8964 copyright protection143PENANAEt5hx4Cp6S 維尼
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女鬼橋2沒有第一部好玩的感覺,總覺得長度有點短。小孩鬼超讓人出戲,前面很多地方明明好像可以變得很恐怖,氛圍都被打破,對話有些地方僵硬又尷尬,解謎的部分也很薄弱,暈是真的暈。8964 copyright protection143PENANAGsvWMrxtfp 維尼
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劇情平鋪直敘沒波瀾,沒有什麼反轉就沒有高潮迭起,論劇情仙米更喜歡紙嫁衣,可能恐怖遊戲就不著重在劇情。8964 copyright protection143PENANAWc9OpP0SME 維尼
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嗯?紙嫁衣也是恐怖解謎阿?8964 copyright protection143PENANAWkOAr9VLwQ 維尼
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至於鬼的形象,小孩鬼零分(最大的敗筆),芭蕾舞女(音樂很好聽)和護士(大概是本場最像鬼的鬼)不錯,教官也還行(會把牆壁打爛很好笑),反而是大魔王看起來不像鬼倒像個——嗯……異形?8964 copyright protection143PENANAg6e0gwwdey 維尼
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結束的也挺突兀?不曉得,就有「阿?沒了喔?」的想法閃過。阿學校死了人大家當失蹤,好奇怪喔(´-﹏-`;)8964 copyright protection143PENANAoGM7qmqVmG 維尼
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仙米到處散播負能量,是心臟麻麻癢癢的那種焦慮。8964 copyright protection143PENANALgIWcjTHMH 維尼
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