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你有遇過以下情況嗎?
寫了很久也沒有人留言,不知道自己寫得好不好?
忘我地寫作,到最後根本不知道自己有沒有進步?
看其他人的作品的時候,不明白自己的作品有哪裏比不上?
不管有沒有,你都來對地方了!因為我在意的根本不是這些!
回到正題,我是浪月新子,現在正在蕉園尋找值得我一看的作品,著有專欄《浪月新子的評論/心得大廳》紀錄我對看過的作品的心得。值得我一看的不是指「好」,而是我看完後會有印象的作品。然而人的時間是有限的,我不能看完所有存在於世上的作品。
因此,我想向想被我看作品的你提出一個挑戰。
在700字(以Penana計算方式為準)以內,給我一個包含了你作品的「故事簡介」以及「值得被人打開的理由」的作品介紹吧。只要不超過字數,想加其他東西也可以(角色介紹等等),要注意的是可以不加作品連結。超過字數的參賽作品(?)一律不看。
我會選出五個我「喜歡的」作品簡介,並在閱讀作品後給出1000字以上的評論/心得(想看心得的質素的人可以先看看我的專欄)。由於這個創挑的獎品不是賞金,所以賞金會平分。
認識我的人都知道我口味很奇怪,不認識我的人也應該不知道該怎麼寫,所以我會在這裏給兩個提示。
一:字數多少不是決定高低的因素,只要你包含了「故事簡介」和「值得被人打開的理由」,只有100字以下也不是問題。
二:不要嘗試討好我或者猜測我的口味,人都不喜歡被看穿,寫你想寫的就好了。
另外還有第三點,我不會在創挑完結前看任何參賽者的作品(在專欄第一期和第1.5期「處理」過的作品不能用作參加此創挑),你作品本身的質素並不會影響賽果(我要看好東西的話直接去熱門榜就可以),請不要因為害怕而卻步。
說到害怕,我不是大神,實力也不高,更沒有甚麼成就,我的心得極其量只能作為參考,不是聖經也不是攻略本,當收到心得的時候,請不要放棄創作的熱情。
就這樣。
感謝久樹為賞金貢獻500 coins!
感謝咲夜為賞金貢獻100 coins!
感謝凝雨為賞金貢獻4000 coins!
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