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露比在各創作挑戰中的作品
ISSUE #3
Author: 露比
露比在各創作挑戰中的作品
Author: 露比
ISSUE #3
【魚魚創挑第九期】一流作家都是如何追人：〈蠟燭〉
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〈蠟燭〉

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月亮壓扁了夕陽

世界亮得看不見星星

世界暗得看不見伊人的臉

我用熱情點亮蠟燭

燭光左右搖晃，左右著

我的心跳

讓最初的戀曲，有了形狀

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忽明忽暗的橘黃影子

模糊了伊人的靈魂

渴望觸摸那一抹溫暖

卻又害怕，被燒傷

創作挑戰連結：

https://www.penana.com/story/152628238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNuVPAXueYH

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露比在各創作挑戰中的作品
Romance
Last updated: Jan 16, 2026
Total word count: 7,686
Total reading time: 26 Minutes
Writer:
露比
愛情 短篇故事 創作挑戰作品
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