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小黑屋的早讀筆記
ISSUE #3
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Sep 2, 2023
小黑屋的早讀筆記
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Sep 2, 2023
ISSUE #3
2023/09/03-沒時間解釋了，快上車！
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這個不管是正文或是文案我覺得都適用。

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之前和黑屋友討論文案調整時，我也是覺得開頭第一段的世界觀寫的很容易理解，但是順順看過去之後，少了一點促使讀者繼續看下一段的急迫性。

所以我才會建議可以放在正文，當然像老卜的編輯一樣說第一章跟第二章對調也行。

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也許有人會感覺不安，因為自己的世界觀龐大，不先說明沒問題嗎？

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你會注意一個陌生人是先從他做了什麼引起你好奇，還是你通靈看到他祖宗十八代了？

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現實如此，小說也可以類推。

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不過也不是說開頭寫世界觀寫山川風景不行，有的人是長項在描寫背景能讓人入迷，不必捨棄長處。

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畢竟小說怎麼寫沒有標準答案，這也正是它可以多樣迷人的原因。

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小黑屋的早讀筆記
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Last updated: Jul 8, 2024
Total word count: 18,921
Total reading time: 63 Minutes
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