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小黑屋的早讀筆記
ISSUE #13
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Sep 12, 2023
小黑屋的早讀筆記
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Sep 12, 2023
ISSUE #13
2023/09/13-都聽你在講
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關於對話比例的部分，我自己是習慣對話比較少的那種。

這可能跟我不喜歡話很多但是沒有重點的人物有關？

如果說要我找話多又覺得有趣的人物，大概就是田村正和演的古畑任三郎，但是那種有趣的多話是包含主題情節跟演員表現方式互相配合。

344Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡehQ3ImxnfR

以前曾經為了人物口音這件事和當時的團隊討論過「台語在聽不懂的人耳中會像是哪國語言？」

我覺得是類似德語有很重的重音跟魄力，但是其他不懂得台語的人感覺不太像；而且讀者未必對於德語有跟我相同印象，所以那段描述就刪掉了。

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語言的暗示技巧，我覺得比較像是作者跟讀者有共識之後，看人物的對話中增加趣味。

344Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvoQxi4WRjx

未必對話多或少才是好故事，但是真的不要照搬現實中的對話，那會很像會議逐字稿。

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小黑屋的早讀筆記
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Last updated: Jul 8, 2024
Total word count: 18,921
Total reading time: 63 Minutes
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