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小黑屋的早讀筆記 - 2023/09/17-你對搬家還是搬家公司有興趣? | Penana
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小黑屋的早讀筆記
ISSUE #17
2023/09/17-你對搬家還是搬家公司有興趣?
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今天放假就讓我少講一點。8964 copyright protection118PENANA58Ms94Qtu4 維尼
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轉場這個部分,我小時候會介意覺得換場景要找符號區隔,但是後來發現這樣看起來更怪異,加上沒有小精靈幫忙我就整個隨它去了。8964 copyright protection118PENANAePLsrwikAy 維尼
頂多加上空行做視覺上區隔,但是空行太多也會造成拖沓感。8964 copyright protection118PENANAPQN9YcdOlg 維尼
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寫到後來才發現即使是沒有明確說明轉場,只要從人物的動作跟其他敘述給予讀者足夠的資訊,讀者是可以理解發生什麼事,不需要額外用旁白說明轉場。8964 copyright protection118PENANAvkUR1KdiJI 維尼
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