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月夜越瘋狂
ISSUE #4
Author: 貓小月
月夜越瘋狂
Author: 貓小月
ISSUE #4
【心得】《離離》——逆水千帆
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未看先說：

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　　這是我指定心得的最後一篇，以後大概也不會有人指定。畢竟，這種閱讀記錄似的心得，應該沒多少人會要。扯遠了……我本來是想說帆帆的。

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　　我認識帆帆的時候是跟蝦蝦一起，也不知道是不是因為這樣、我老覺得她們像雙胞胎，而且是感情很好的雙胞胎。聽說她們還有一起寫文？有時間去翻來看，最近忙著寫中秋賀文——不是小熊那個。

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　　說到中秋賀文，它就是心得晚的元凶！最近趕它、差點忘記我心得還沒寫。我記得“離離”也還沒寫完，今天應該能寫完這篇吧？希望。

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《離離》——逆水千帆（＃1～10，只有十篇、應該很快？）

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簡介：還沒看內文時的想法——我比較喜歡《予良辰》

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＃1：個給是什麼？

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　　小情侶？我以為只是要轉學那個的損友。

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　　跪在大腿兩側……一個人怎麼跪兩個地方？（我後來想了想，是跨跪嗎？）

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　　“他們的吻綿長而深情”＜=我感覺像少年也回應了

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＃2：……開頭我就想吐槽，既然說了陽光溫暖、用“刺眼”好像怪怪的？刺眼不療癒吧？

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　　南城是雨城？一個地方應該不至於氣候相差太多，所以是兩個地方？轉學順便搬家？

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　　大衣那句好長，會斷氣。

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　　……邊走邊玩手機算中二病？

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　　什麼是“很抓馬”？

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　　為什麼要固定治療+吃藥？前面沒說過啊？

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＃3：溫暖不定的陰霾……？可以解釋一下意思嗎？

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　　很×臉？我猜是很不要臉，可是這是國文課嗎？字不懂、意思也不懂，理解錯怎麼辦？

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　　會考＜=非台灣地區不好理解吧？

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＃4：（舉手）請服務生分開醬料是為了大白鯊？（這個比較好記）可是他們認識不到一天吧？會不會太了解了？

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＃5：一來就是心聲？阿晨是誰？小勞是什麼？

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　　咦？是訊息啊？可是，是誰給誰啊？（我那段看完才搞清楚誰傳給誰，順便搞清楚三個人關係）

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　　權烯？這又是誰？

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　　口嗨是什麼？又一對男男？這是現代校園、沒私設吧？男男頻率會不會偏高了？正常不是應該男女？

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　　跳電那個……又要斷氣了。

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　　……都恐懼了，還有空“凝神細看”？

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　　用“水”拍人……我沒跳片場吧？

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＃6：……一口氣說完真的不會斷氣嗎？

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＃1～6：感覺還不錯，可以給個瑕不掩瑜的四星。

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＃7：沒看作話的話、我完全不知道這篇在說誰。然後，作者你好清楚菸喔，有抽嗎？

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＃8：為什麼打架可以打一章？然後……我看不太懂這章到底寫什麼，我只知道他們打架了。

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＃9：打架的後續處理，好像沒什麼劇情？我還是不知道為什麼打架……

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＃10：假條，沒什麼好說的。

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　　整體來說，我覺得作者敘事清楚，劇情也很清楚。不過偏執的大白鯊他爸、感覺不會這麼簡單放過大白鯊。還有，文中不少髒話，個人不喜歡髒話啊……

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