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寫給兩個小孩的故事
ISSUE #1
Author: 好好吃雪糕
寫給兩個小孩的故事
Author: 好好吃雪糕
ISSUE #1
陽明山之旅
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早就天亮的路燈照著通往餐廳的路。

散步的腳說著該休息了。

夏夜的熱氣抱著你，肚子裡的鴿子也在叫了。

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到了！到了！

逐漸清晰的橘色燈光、綠葉和竹子搭建的帳篷。

讓你忘卻逛街的疲勞。

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上菜了！上菜了！

看來沒有青椒，能夠好好享用！

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深夜的山路，會害怕嗎？不用擔心，你有妹妹的陪伴。

下次再見！

夏蟬的合唱響起，炒菜鍋伴奏著。

還不到晚安的時候！

朦朧的睡意被飯香踢走。

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快看看！

有妳最愛的鮮魚湯！

剩下的睡意被鮮美的味道一掃而空。

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伴奏結束，主唱也去保養喉嚨了。

快上車！快上車！要回家囉！

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深夜的山路，會害怕嗎？不用擔心，妳有哥哥的陪伴。

下次再見！

給媽媽的話：423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQovB4ascmd

擬人法不只可以用來訓練聯想力，也能夠體認到想像力的有趣之處。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpt6jlrFxju

不須借助物質的遊戲：可以和孩子們同時擬人一個東西，玩樂的同時也可以做到腦袋運轉的目的。

除了上述提到的擬人法遊戲，摹寫也是很重要的能力，試著將人事物用視覺的摹寫出來。

熟練之後，可再嘗試其他感官的摹寫。

主要是一次與阿姨他們的出遊，並以他們的視角寫寫看一首詩，以童趣的方向寫詩還是第一次，也覺得挺有趣的。

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Last updated: Jul 30, 2023
Total word count: 4,156
Total reading time: 14 Minutes
Writer:
好好吃雪糕
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