這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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這是哪來的神鬼力量326Please respect copyright.PENANAp02is9KRuz
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我撥開塑膠往外看 目瞪口呆326Please respect copyright.PENANAuocjbzb36p
四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律326Please respect copyright.PENANAVdtVD5Ljga
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移326Please respect copyright.PENANA71ix3ThpqH
說到平衡 我找不到好用的磅秤326Please respect copyright.PENANAatT34PnXFq
Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡326Please respect copyright.PENANA2DX3OrcklX
我又沒有保冷劑 時間一久就爆氣326Please respect copyright.PENANAVEbzGpA3GW
自始至終都是某隻小強的錯326Please respect copyright.PENANAphev7fgFCc
不是我的問題 是夏日這個氣炸鍋 326Please respect copyright.PENANAt9GkyOYswL
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?326Please respect copyright.PENANAE9rPrd1J0I
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說326Please respect copyright.PENANA0gTA59I3Wt
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它326Please respect copyright.PENANADXAu1mQQOT
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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We're watching
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刀光和劍影 這個夏季 差點就沒樂趣 326Please respect copyright.PENANAvsQibN1xCq
降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析326Please respect copyright.PENANAPThAqtC9RR
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理326Please respect copyright.PENANAlAYuBeikCA
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能326Please respect copyright.PENANAXE5Y2mfXUm
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人326Please respect copyright.PENANAxWu9vk9ueQ
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我326Please respect copyright.PENANAwwZlfQPIo8
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭326Please respect copyright.PENANANI1GeO6lr8
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞326Please respect copyright.PENANAcenmfSYhn1
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得326Please respect copyright.PENANAcKUx6mKZMt
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本326Please respect copyright.PENANAqOximJPn73
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭326Please respect copyright.PENANA3Wd54lLPtW
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲326Please respect copyright.PENANAejHBwFQWHu
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己326Please respect copyright.PENANAMpSK4Q9Dns
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去326Please respect copyright.PENANAOKhBPoyZ4z
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?326Please respect copyright.PENANAABFRP0DPMp
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說326Please respect copyright.PENANAqmq5DJpg75
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它326Please respect copyright.PENANA4CXCiHEVcP
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張326Please respect copyright.PENANA4NhR4klElw
就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?326Please respect copyright.PENANAxT3r9BRjR6
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扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑326Please respect copyright.PENANADuEJx765Fz
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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知不知道色厲內荏究竟哪四個字326Please respect copyright.PENANApgeqqIxXME
尾巴下垂心虛而吠敗犬就是如此326Please respect copyright.PENANA3wJp2Q9akY
裝出老子不怕的樣子只為了掩飾326Please respect copyright.PENANAG2s9qsEwns
殊不知已被看穿可悲的心思
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熱到不行的盛夏總算已經完畢326Please respect copyright.PENANArlWme8aXnc
將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力326Please respect copyright.PENANAEqoKY8AHyT
作用力必定會帶來反作用力326Please respect copyright.PENANAu5hXdvGFpX
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看326Please respect copyright.PENANAKgBkpYvDit
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管326Please respect copyright.PENANADBsgVj11AJ
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命326Please respect copyright.PENANAA7a5eNympQ
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?326Please respect copyright.PENANAfifHfw6sO7
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說326Please respect copyright.PENANAgphGHBn1JP
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它326Please respect copyright.PENANA4loLxVHcRD
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?326Please respect copyright.PENANAnPpkf9jgHO
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說326Please respect copyright.PENANAqxjJIS1cDz
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它326Please respect copyright.PENANA95letuG4eu
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806326Please respect copyright.PENANAhQfuBuHbhw