這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律486Please respect copyright.PENANASvfoZaxfJe
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移486Please respect copyright.PENANA88p16xDgsG
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Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡486Please respect copyright.PENANA9N6n5QwAwo
我又沒有保冷劑 時間一久就爆氣486Please respect copyright.PENANAfZFqxYAsQN
自始至終都是某隻小強的錯486Please respect copyright.PENANAGUwbdOVZOS
不是我的問題 是夏日這個氣炸鍋 486Please respect copyright.PENANAbUfSgWQm6M
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逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說486Please respect copyright.PENANAfp1abDLFeW
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它486Please respect copyright.PENANAuDbyj8VU9Q
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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刀光和劍影 這個夏季 差點就沒樂趣 486Please respect copyright.PENANAi6xzuIFww7
降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析486Please respect copyright.PENANApKCCmWE1gs
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理486Please respect copyright.PENANAimsFIkS2Z0
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能486Please respect copyright.PENANAOjTt3ESr0b
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人486Please respect copyright.PENANAYN6rcqL5W2
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我486Please respect copyright.PENANA44LGfiWK6s
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭486Please respect copyright.PENANAfZnUH61B62
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞486Please respect copyright.PENANAONG1pGyiMy
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得486Please respect copyright.PENANAeNlsfKJAES
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本486Please respect copyright.PENANAwKj6Pk7kwc
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭486Please respect copyright.PENANAn179fjWcA0
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲486Please respect copyright.PENANAcXL8CQ9lDI
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己486Please respect copyright.PENANAFQ6YpOW7wa
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去486Please respect copyright.PENANABgHgObIj4M
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?486Please respect copyright.PENANApP7eWwpk87
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說486Please respect copyright.PENANAAdJSnujVXX
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它486Please respect copyright.PENANAzNF2EmvUJO
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張486Please respect copyright.PENANATkE0LcqyOe
就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?486Please respect copyright.PENANAdnq70ymQTQ
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扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑486Please respect copyright.PENANAgB1THZrdUs
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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知不知道色厲內荏究竟哪四個字486Please respect copyright.PENANAUUC6CesCrZ
尾巴下垂心虛而吠敗犬就是如此486Please respect copyright.PENANAa3wGbwdznu
裝出老子不怕的樣子只為了掩飾486Please respect copyright.PENANASyyX11GOnY
殊不知已被看穿可悲的心思
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熱到不行的盛夏總算已經完畢486Please respect copyright.PENANAtztdh0cKSE
將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力486Please respect copyright.PENANA7tA0HlApLQ
作用力必定會帶來反作用力486Please respect copyright.PENANAKKUo46k5Jj
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看486Please respect copyright.PENANAMri8akx5Yp
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管486Please respect copyright.PENANAY6tH6tZxIB
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命486Please respect copyright.PENANAPNn2fKIlEo
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?486Please respect copyright.PENANAelKJGUgROg
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說486Please respect copyright.PENANA8NAAO0H8GN
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它486Please respect copyright.PENANA1H4ELK7OGq
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?486Please respect copyright.PENANADRDJ41iAAU
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說486Please respect copyright.PENANAUVPTQqBuel
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它486Please respect copyright.PENANAIR1WNKPlxa
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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