這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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黑傘白傘粉紅傘大張 消極來抵抗327Please respect copyright.PENANAze5nFrXxMe
我有樣學樣 撐開我的百元洋傘327Please respect copyright.PENANADeQ1gZGANu
啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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這是哪來的神鬼力量327Please respect copyright.PENANAybaYhCoE3j
塑膠布蓋在頭上 彷彿有一種 sign ~ 哦327Please respect copyright.PENANAbJAlZb6KX4
我撥開塑膠往外看 目瞪口呆327Please respect copyright.PENANA7s0UhCYBC9
四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律327Please respect copyright.PENANAYVq04fLTPF
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移327Please respect copyright.PENANAJs7bR0gbHJ
說到平衡 我找不到好用的磅秤327Please respect copyright.PENANACkfsOVRnQo
Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡327Please respect copyright.PENANALLzgZ20oiG
我又沒有保冷劑 時間一久就爆氣327Please respect copyright.PENANAYFqxXaVkzD
自始至終都是某隻小強的錯327Please respect copyright.PENANAFwKM8Jx8zV
不是我的問題 是夏日這個氣炸鍋 327Please respect copyright.PENANAmytqQ1yxOe
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?327Please respect copyright.PENANALz06R8Rb8I
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說327Please respect copyright.PENANAqNuesBmQ3Y
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它327Please respect copyright.PENANAhnvgK9bcBd
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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刀光和劍影 這個夏季 差點就沒樂趣 327Please respect copyright.PENANALq8gdrpGEl
降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析327Please respect copyright.PENANA1TEdr1VERE
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理327Please respect copyright.PENANAkVegYYDerZ
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能327Please respect copyright.PENANA24fgDAPU6J
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人327Please respect copyright.PENANAciz53a6TrW
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我327Please respect copyright.PENANAINmOJ2fp3H
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭327Please respect copyright.PENANA5cgMmtIsnC
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞327Please respect copyright.PENANA7ONqGSFV5o
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得327Please respect copyright.PENANAEk3aeYinpp
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本327Please respect copyright.PENANAlpUwzCcEAO
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭327Please respect copyright.PENANA3soY1YOfrs
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲327Please respect copyright.PENANA1FEz0bF5Zr
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己327Please respect copyright.PENANAHwrSs7vSDi
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去327Please respect copyright.PENANAF9enTPsiIl
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?327Please respect copyright.PENANAd9y5rl1D68
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說327Please respect copyright.PENANANx7T4KmB3q
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它327Please respect copyright.PENANAricw2lkrFX
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張327Please respect copyright.PENANAWHzN7VKyEQ
就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?327Please respect copyright.PENANAiVTJaN0o9p
遠勝用嘴造謠327Please respect copyright.PENANAcRV2CfKA48
扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑327Please respect copyright.PENANAtpi9nAgU9R
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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知不知道色厲內荏究竟哪四個字327Please respect copyright.PENANA0MwKkbweRO
尾巴下垂心虛而吠敗犬就是如此327Please respect copyright.PENANAAE4G3CX11I
裝出老子不怕的樣子只為了掩飾327Please respect copyright.PENANAyZOr7ic9P1
殊不知已被看穿可悲的心思
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熱到不行的盛夏總算已經完畢327Please respect copyright.PENANAmN0yCfcITp
將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力327Please respect copyright.PENANAYbne4KuRUK
作用力必定會帶來反作用力327Please respect copyright.PENANAV9C1c0URYC
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看327Please respect copyright.PENANA0Y9V3feMl9
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管327Please respect copyright.PENANAIB0EtO2FTX
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命327Please respect copyright.PENANAE5S39D0Aw9
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?327Please respect copyright.PENANAYSaQFpFObH
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說327Please respect copyright.PENANA4o162QKs71
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它327Please respect copyright.PENANAoj77vEBFWD
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?327Please respect copyright.PENANAScBXAgU6PA
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說327Please respect copyright.PENANA8qA5Wkf1hC
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它327Please respect copyright.PENANA5pBcHNcR1Z
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806327Please respect copyright.PENANAo0oFWAKLKL