大家好：389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi0ouPbrUx4
389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr0ImCn87KE
好的小說通常會跟詩詞一樣，散發一種韻味，吸引讀者閱讀。389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzBn9ELh6D
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那該怎麼樣才能營造出這樣的韻味呢？389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqimAXuYQM
389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8KNjUhOydv
根據多年的閱讀與寫作觀察，我發現具有韻味的小說一定是文意通順，句子精簡好讀！而要做到這樣的韻味，首先要修掉習慣性的贅詞以及同義詞語。這樣做可以使句子通順易讀，進入讀者心靈的力道也會更直接！389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLiwgdzRSOB
389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKLRuoigJml
聽到或者看到這裡，也許您會疑惑那些詞語是需要進行修改或者刪除的？389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWwg484KR8e
389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuoNAdF9QdQ
我的心得是除了平日多閱讀有助修辭外，最簡單的辦法是您其實可以透過朗讀的方式去修改自己的文章。只要是朗讀起來有卡卡些微不順之處都是可能需要修改的地方喔！389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHRBlgzbUDD
389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyMPWSK3sys
這就是今天與大家分享的寫作心得。希望能幫助到對修辭有疑惑的朋友！感謝大家今天的收看與收聽。謝謝大家。389Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7km3sNIa5c
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寫作路上不孤單 - 心得分享
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該如何營造小說的韻味？
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