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你寫文我來看
ENTRY #16
Author: 草沙
Published:
Jun 12, 2023
你寫文我來看
Published:
Jun 12, 2023
ENTRY #16
傳奇修仙大作【仙途】----草沙原創
Author: 草沙
Published:
Jun 12, 2023
1 Min Read
261 Words
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長篇小說篇章過長，不知該如何取捨出三萬字給大大講評，但因為作者對自己很沒自信，又想參考多方意見來修正自己寫文的盲點，所以還是心一橫參加了本次創挑，希望大大能給予建議！

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如果真的要選出範圍，為了讓讀者方便閱讀，作品一章設定大約一千字，就請大大看［包含楔子的前三十章］吧！

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傳送門：https://www.penana.com/story/123028

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在此先謝過大大賞臉了！

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故事簡介：

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三名互無關係的高中生因為一場擄人意外穿越大界，來到語言不通充滿混亂與修仙者的地方，在克服語言問題後，才發現想要回家就必須努力修仙，因為唯有真神才能跨越大界。

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三人因此踏上仙途，卻在修仙過程中發現回家已經不是最終的目標，到底三人的遭遇如何？請聽我娓娓道來......

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