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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
ENTRY #33
Author: 東芽
Published:
Jul 17, 2023
第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
Published:
Jul 17, 2023
ENTRY #33
【第一章】我認為新版比較好
Author: 東芽
Published:
Jul 17, 2023
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No Plagiarism!TDItuHJ4bW8KBMVM7kFsposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我認為新版的第一章比較好，感覺故事更有張力，文字也比較通順合理。

但真的有點腐腐的，應該是幾個關鍵動詞的選用所造成

216.73.216.37

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