No Plagiarism!Gpum1JRrADx8v0BQZGbeposted on PENANA 一定新版!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!8964 copyright protection146PENANAedgMUyO2HS 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAeQiwTD5vFs
8964 copyright protection146PENANASAG5ykQ8Cq 維尼
1)請問你閲讀至第一部的哪一章?8964 copyright protection146PENANAilNuogXPlz 維尼
上次寫完書評後還有繼續看喔,從75章上,一直看到250章下,然後今天又補了除付費以外的全部章節(269下)8964 copyright protection146PENANAwxHCVxWo7E 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANApzskDWaQJ7
8964 copyright protection146PENANAMvZKsmXlKu 維尼
(我不是在考試嗎?怎麼都在看書?都怪黑正的半蟲戰機太好看)8964 copyright protection146PENANAJB5fcpcqR4 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAGZl5HXdZpm
8964 copyright protection146PENANAwSeB1hnssz 維尼
(另外說一聲抱歉,我是真的窮,沒錢買付費章節QQ(我真的很需要錢錢OuO8964 copyright protection146PENANAw9CAZJ5Z3S 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAZqf2El2v9m
8964 copyright protection146PENANAsORQl1sBzF 維尼
2)請問你最喜歡哪些角色?8964 copyright protection146PENANAYRD823Nnni 維尼
看了新版的第一章後,從睦斂威轉到了默守晨,有種受轉攻的感覺OuO8964 copyright protection146PENANADzdh3JNzfC 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAsyiAOlqceS
8964 copyright protection146PENANABFc1V2SwIR 維尼
還有依舊沒變的楊旭娜,這次我就直說了,蘿莉Saikou!!!8964 copyright protection146PENANA3koKagNGKD 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAwIPucDp4dy
8964 copyright protection146PENANAftj0dS69bK 維尼
(沒討厭的角色,第三題就不答了)8964 copyright protection146PENANAvbRYDBfeGE 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAVDxssjAVgN
8964 copyright protection146PENANANwYE700U1J 維尼
5)請問你最想凑合哪一對CP?(可以發揮創意,拆散CP,甚至男男或女女)8964 copyright protection146PENANAl796MgCcGR 維尼
還是和上次一樣,睦斂威跟默守晨!8964 copyright protection146PENANAbKyFIfMFsi 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAaNt3WdXI4F
8964 copyright protection146PENANAMKeLq8R3dt 維尼
看了新版的第一章後我已經想像得出他們愛愛的情節了!麻煩這些情節在我的腦中待久一點150Please respect copyright.PENANAgrv0yQpMLj
8964 copyright protection146PENANAn68vYtKlZN 維尼
(欸不是我今天要考數學)8964 copyright protection146PENANAW6sKTdLaZU 維尼
(好了,考完了,炒了,他們愛愛的臆想還在我的腦中揮之不去OuO)8964 copyright protection146PENANAJaENovYCfu 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAV1hTqSJA4m
8964 copyright protection146PENANAnxrjBznfRv 維尼
6)請問你最喜歡哪一場戰鬥?8964 copyright protection146PENANATVDwpD9bsH 維尼
就是開頭那一場,太刺激了,建議再來一張床(?8964 copyright protection146PENANAi3s9vtdZd8 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAH3HQENXoj8
8964 copyright protection146PENANABofNE2yItj 維尼
8)請問這部作品的哪些優點最吸引?8964 copyright protection146PENANAKGqTOGdH1A 維尼
角色之間的互動都好好看!感覺比戰鬥場面還要好看。8964 copyright protection146PENANAn6zfy0FCDn 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAxqMLYtee8l
8964 copyright protection146PENANACyO9bGfzXL 維尼
9)請問這部作品的哪一點還可以再改進?8964 copyright protection146PENANAL7zsrbXL4o 維尼
(請別浪費時間寫出目前已知的缺點,阁下的时间非常宝贵。)8964 copyright protection146PENANA4asxZGROVT 維尼
已知缺點:劇情混亂、對白太多、初期角色太多、節奏緩慢沉悶、標點符號問題、台詞中二、主角不突出、篇幅太長、文筆配不上插圖、描寫太細緻、戰記卻沒有大場面的戰爭、與想像的蟲人不符合、不喜歡故事題材。8964 copyright protection146PENANASarViYh1e9 維尼
沒有睦斂威跟默守晨的BL情節(差評(建議出同人,改名半床戰記8964 copyright protection146PENANACCNyYUqnqs 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAV4WN5wJ42L
8964 copyright protection146PENANAt6dnAEAuR1 維尼
至於我投新版的原因都很明顯了吧(那就不多說了(先去流鼻血了8964 copyright protection146PENANAVsZn5VEOMq 維尼
150Please respect copyright.PENANAfFFgi3rUSk
150Please respect copyright.PENANAUfXycvxhGq
8964 copyright protection146PENANAh72EDNNQZV 維尼
172.70.100.202
ns 172.70.100.202da2