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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
ENTRY #36
Author: 聿
Published:
Aug 6, 2023
第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
Published:
Aug 6, 2023
ENTRY #36
投舊版一票
Author: 聿
Published:
Aug 6, 2023
1 Min Read
110 Words
No Plagiarism!qx7G8BT6RtgiZ73punbKposted on PＥNAＮＡ

第一次寫評論，只是個人的拙見。

我覺得舊版在場景和角色外型描寫上在第一章開頭不久就點出來，讓讀者對於角色的特質、外貌、形象等有一定的認識。555Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTuooviljD

而新版在打鬥場面上有較多著墨，但是人物描繪上似乎就沒有舊版來的鮮明。

所以我覺得舊版的第一章會略勝一籌

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