舊版的打戲節奏感比較流暢。
新版有好幾處對話以省略號隔開成三段甚至更多,過於零碎,反而讓我無法馬上理解角色在說什麼。
ns 172.70.130.154da2舊版的打戲節奏感比較流暢。8964 copyright protection249PENANAr4GmbnmS2P 維尼
新版有好幾處對話以省略號隔開成三段甚至更多,過於零碎,反而讓我無法馬上理解角色在說什麼。8964 copyright protection249PENANAdqbzhDDsjW 維尼
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