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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
ENTRY #31
Author: 任夢飛 Remy Flynn
Published:
Jul 9, 2023
第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
Published:
Jul 9, 2023
ENTRY #31
【投票組】舊版+1
Author: 任夢飛 Remy Flynn
Published:
Jul 9, 2023
1 Min Read
53 Words
No Plagiarism!7AqO6EeuTCERnHDphEP6posted on PＥNAＮＡ

舊版的打戲節奏感比較流暢。

新版有好幾處對話以省略號隔開成三段甚至更多，過於零碎，反而讓我無法馬上理解角色在說什麼。

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