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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
ENTRY #14
Author: 仁傑大師
Published:
Jun 2, 2023
第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
Published:
Jun 2, 2023
ENTRY #14
【第一章】我認為新舊版各有各好呢
Author: 仁傑大師
Published:
Jun 2, 2023
1 Min Read
99 Words
No Plagiarism!dHtGPht0leRkQ6UR8BKdposted on PＥNAＮＡ

舊版本戰鬥感較重，代入感很強，但感覺文筆過分用力，描寫場景的位置很多，本人讀著有點累。654Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPIO7tT4tbd

新版本文筆通順，看著舒服，但就是太舒服了感覺不夠深刻。那重覆的說話是要表達在爭奪意識還是什麼，本人不太喜歡。

我比較偏好舊版本，有電影感。

654Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2ERbhrzf5J

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