舊版本戰鬥感較重，代入感很強，但感覺文筆過分用力，描寫場景的位置很多，本人讀著有點累。181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFm5BxCR1Ik
新版本文筆通順，看著舒服，但就是太舒服了感覺不夠深刻。那重覆的說話是要表達在爭奪意識還是什麼，本人不太喜歡。
我比較偏好舊版本，有電影感。
181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWvBOs2viPQ
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Jun 3, 2023
ENTRY #14
【第一章】我認為新舊版各有各好呢
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