第一次寫評論，只是個人的拙見。
我覺得舊版在場景和角色外型描寫上在第一章開頭不久就點出來，讓讀者對於角色的特質、外貌、形象等有一定的認識。334Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDDKDwEBesm
而新版在打鬥場面上有較多著墨，但是人物描繪上似乎就沒有舊版來的鮮明。
所以我覺得舊版的第一章會略勝一籌
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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
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Aug 7, 2023
ENTRY #36
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