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【徵求評論心得】最弱的我其實乃最強? - 複:原來是我搞錯了 | Penana
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【徵求評論心得】最弱的我其實乃最強?
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複:原來是我搞錯了
No Plagiarism!1mnCzZ891BLciTUO1zXJposted on PENANA 好的,原來我被誤導了,再看看就發現搞錯了。8964 copyright protection286PENANAA5SyfapcwV 維尼
你說翅膀啊,我就以為是飛行比賽,還能用劍揮別人的8964 copyright protection286PENANATJmcUOq5Wm 維尼
靠北啦原來是打架比賽,我還以為是無規則飛行比賽啦8964 copyright protection286PENANAXko2dPvnm1 維尼
290Please respect copyright.PENANAj8GkV8ML8N
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還是我搞錯了?有些誤導性,建議再多介紹一下比賽規則啊、背景啊、到底是什麼,可以清晰點8964 copyright protection286PENANAmz6PUzCp4e 維尼
然後認真看,發現原來比想像中無聊多了哈哈哈⋯⋯文筆還是欣賞的,但⋯⋯細節全無,背景不清,建議重寫,而且真的起承轉合非常不清晰,壓根看不出。8964 copyright protection286PENANAEDvOpZycDD 維尼
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但還是那句,我願意幫忙喔!需要的話就找我,我建議重寫加上設計和宣傳可能可以上熱榜8964 copyright protection286PENANAgZSLPCysJJ 維尼
290Please respect copyright.PENANAAWUqHEfJGD
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