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回家的傘
ISSUE #9
Author: D.V
回家的傘
Author: D.V
ISSUE #9
場15、16、17
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景：便利店門口   時：午後  雨剛停353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmxYnud6kLk
人：培豪、7店員、路人

△    雨正停後悠閒的7門口，店員手拿制服在門口休息抽菸，培豪看著手機撐著雨傘往7走去，快到門口時放下傘看看天空發現雨已停，將傘放進傘架後進入7，店員趕緊倉促的吸了幾口菸後披上制服跟進

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場16353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFxC8PrL9ez
景：便利店內   時：午後  陰353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtztUolbGAR
人：培豪、7店員、客人

△    培豪看著手機拿了瓶飲料走向櫃台結帳，店員在櫃台等著，拿起飲料刷條碼

「嗶！」353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoRn6W4dMVu
店員：25塊……先生？353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBJ51fY0mfj
培豪：哦！

△    培豪回神將眼睛從手機移開，側著頭往肩背包裡翻找著錢包，拿出錢包翻找著零錢，店員等待時看看窗外的傘架，想想跟培豪說353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡptqETXbhL4
店員：欸，外面那把傘是你的嗎？353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQKuGOHtaNW
培豪：嗯

△    培豪拿出零錢放在桌上，店員收起打著發票，門外別的客人進入

培豪：怎了嗎？353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpNOxIUzbYu
店員：沒有啦！只是你這把傘跟前幾天一個女生客人拿的傘一樣353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡefae0qVvj0
培豪：是哦！你的記憶力還真好353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZYi9NQvRSz
店員：因為她剛走出門口就被車撞了啊！不想記得也很難

△    培豪聽到這頓時一驚，驚訝的轉頭看了一下門外的傘，然後繼續追問店員

培豪：什麼時候的事？353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwesiTQX3Xi
店員：嗯……大慨5天前吧！禮拜一！

△    培豪眼睛瞪大，回想起那天傘飄到他面前的畫面 (ins 畫面)353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmHjyBYjXuv
△    培豪呆站，後方客人走到培豪身後準備結帳，店員催促著培豪他才回過神來

店員：先生？先生？353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJDNNDNQ2rF
培豪：嗯353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK4mgFJVAqU
店員：抱歉後面有人要結帳353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ14eBpy1pAv
培豪：哦！抱歉！

△    培豪趕緊拿起飲料發票離去

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場17353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeWl5a0ICQy
景：便利店門口   時：午後  陰353Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡibFC7wFChK
人：培豪、7店員(在店內)、路人

△    培豪拿著飲料走出門口，若有所思的看著那把雨傘，這時電話響起，培豪回神拿起電話接聽

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培豪：喂~？我在路上了……，好啦好啦！我知道什麼不能說啦！

△    培豪不耐煩的掛上電話，看著那把傘，再轉頭看看天空，再看看那把傘，皺了下眉頭，將傘留在傘架上轉頭離去，過了一會兒又折回，拿出手機對著雨傘拍了照片，出店門口的客人好奇的看了一下，培豪不好意思的收起手機離去

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回家的傘
Screenplay
Suspense
Thriller
Last updated: May 29, 2023
Total word count: 10,187
Total reading time: 34 Minutes
Writer:
D.V
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