喜愛耽美ABO歡迎進來討論。
近日，我創作一部耽美ABO文章，想知道哪邊需要改善和建議。
我的故事少人觀看，一度想中斷連載了，感覺自己筆下的人物都寫的很爛。
請給點建議和改善的方法
前三名個給一百，其餘感謝提供
作品連結：https://www.penana.com/article/1095642
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耽美ABO討論
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