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好奇大家的看法
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其實我主要想問的是大家對這種用潦草的敘述,來彰顯主角瘋狂的感覺。
(有些人有提到篇幅問題,說合併起來比較好看,合併版的,我放在留言區喔)
3000多字的文,大概碼了三四天,好奇大家對我這種的文章的看法,因為這次為了呈現女主的瘋狂,然後又是用第一視角,所以寫的比較隨興潦草。
好奇大家對這種文章的想法,有什麼心得或指教都可以說出來。
我寫小說是寫好玩的,心理承受能力還行,所以評論的言辭銳利點也是可以的(但還請針對文章),文長不限。
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