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每個人,都在尋找生命的另一半……
每個讀者,都在尋找閱讀的另一半……
你,就是我命中注定要為你獻出❤得的作者嗎?
即日起,只要在本創挑中宣傳,就有機會得到讀書會成員「狩書魔」的千字心得回饋!我們是專門狩獵好書的魔狼🐺
我們的成員包含:QRS、王斯洛、弄墨、阿賴耶、青小豆、挪拉夫、海貍、鬼才、魚落井、黑正、鈴鈴卷、綠木柚子、凝雨(按照首字筆畫排序)。
感謝大家的參與,讓前兩屆的活動順利落幕!詳情可見:
【第一屆】https://www.penana.com/story/120361
【第二屆】https://www.penana.com/story/123578
另有專門收錄本創挑心得的共同作品,也歡迎大家移步看看:
https://www.penana.com/story/124959
關於本次宣傳投稿規則、時程及心得撰寫原則,請詳見下方說明👇
一、投稿時間:
即刻起至5/19(五)21:00
二、投稿注意事項:
1. 每人在本次創挑中只能投稿 1 本書。
2. 作品總字數必須大於三萬字。
3. 請在內文中寫下 100 至 500 字的書籍介紹。
4. 可能會出現負評,玻璃心的作者請勿參加。
5. 前兩屆中獎的作品仍可投稿,但會被排除於抽獎名單中。
6. 廣東話、同人作品請經過審慎考慮再投稿,前者是因為狩書魔成員中只有幾位能看懂廣東話,不利於撰寫心得;後者是由於成員不一定看過原作品,因此可能無法提供深入的心得。
7. 5/19(五)21:00 到創挑結束前仍然可以投稿,但是沒有機會得到心得回饋,只有宣傳效果。
三、時程:
5/19(五)22:00,我們將從投稿的書中隨機抽出 10 本,每本書將獲得 1 名狩書魔的心得,於 5/20 至 5/30 間上傳至創挑頁面。
四、閱讀及心得撰寫原則:
1. 狩書魔成員以閱讀前 10 章為原則,總字數不超過兩萬字。若前 10 章超過兩萬字,則成員會自行減少閱讀的章節數。
2. 每篇心得回饋的字數為 1000 字以上,以 Penana 字數為準。
3. 寫好的心得將會發布在創挑中,並於留言區 @ 該位作者前來觀看。
五、賞金、名次及徽章分配:
1. 由於參酌狩書魔成員需費心思閱讀及撰寫心得,因此徽章將以抽籤方式頒發給 10 名撰寫心得的成員。
2. 賞金由所有人平分。
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劇情進展比較慢的問題,我有私下收到過幾位讀者的回饋。第一次寫這種題材,可能節奏沒掌握得很好,所以開頭比較冗長,主旨也不夠明確。
無論如何,大家的建議我都銘記在心。就像我常說的,這些都會成為下一本書的養份(絕對不會讓書重生,放心)。
另外就是我沒注意到黑正會在意名字的英文拼音。考量到不是每一個角色都會有人物設定,也許我可以考慮在人物第一次出場時標在後面,例如瑟琳 (Celine)。如果有其他的想法,也請不吝於指教。
會採用比較偏向翻譯的風格,是因為我也比較習慣這種寫法。因為從小閱讀的書籍大多是西洋小說,因此在寫這個題材時便順理成章地用了翻譯手法。老實說,寫的時候我腦中也會有個人在唸英文對白XD
最後,再次感謝黑正的用心良苦!!祝福黑正的半蟲戰記能夠大紅大紫!!
penana.com/story/87245
以後我繼續閱讀,再看看還有什麼心得可寫👍