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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
ENTRY #19
Author: 虛冲
Published:
May 4, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
Published:
May 4, 2023
ENTRY #19
客中飲
Author: 虛冲
Published:
May 4, 2023
1 Min Read
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【原詩】

《客中行》李白

蘭陵美酒鬱金香，玉碗盛來琥珀光。

但使主人能醉客，不知何處是他鄉。

【我的新詩】

《客中飲》640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHBDu9yMXLC

窗外雨後出太陽

舉一杯威士忌

闊腹水晶杯

透琥珀光

先聞香

再嚐640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGkOftLzWzd

640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5HMS1C7JLm

天氣變幻蘇格蘭

晴雨交加不斷

卻見雙彩虹

同望窗外

此風景

無價640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5SRbJY8vL2

640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ24JPbFNOEU

誰是主人誰是客

幾杯落肚之後

哪個管得了

何處他鄉

輕碰杯

乾掉

216.73.216.67

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