No Plagiarism!nPuXdiCPvaqTzya1FyICposted on PENANA
完讀四章心得8964 copyright protection494PENANAtDgnXIFNlM 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAGbJuxJ9Cr5
8964 copyright protection494PENANA1NKpLaVKxp 維尼
上次寫心得時的閱讀進度,差不多是第三章的一半,所以有些地方可能沒什麽改變。😅8964 copyright protection494PENANAbz9wfRtPMG 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAhcVDj891QB
8964 copyright protection494PENANAFWfRzoF6qo 維尼
1)一至四章完讀。8964 copyright protection494PENANAlRzQiO3Wqu 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA1IVCNsDxBL
8964 copyright protection494PENANAtrRjm6COq1 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAA5UpDibKan
8964 copyright protection494PENANArNnANaVKuO 維尼
2)男角色方面,第四章出現了海格力斯,但表現并沒什麽活躍,幾乎被凱尼絲淹沒,所以還是俄里翁。8964 copyright protection494PENANAYmts1KCxmh 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAMTPcmeXiNT
8964 copyright protection494PENANAcZESO79SXk 維尼
女角色方面,尼刻在第四章有很多表現,反超美杜莎和潘多拉,是目前最喜歡的女角色。😚8964 copyright protection494PENANAiLozYc8K7z 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAP4g2bZEPsA
8964 copyright protection494PENANASxS6puG7jL 維尼
凱尼絲就……可能因爲多了根,很難歸類為男或女,感覺也普普,多了根也還是不夠有特色。8964 copyright protection494PENANA0R4O8T10gq 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAv2BUddqWQw
8964 copyright protection494PENANA4m0rm7eil4 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAS1I73tKcut
8964 copyright protection494PENANAPJIONIwOcE 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAMnD0bgJlBh
8964 copyright protection494PENANAIZduBntAHH 維尼
3)討厭的角色還真的沒有,就連以前討厭的戰神阿瑞斯,感覺時過境遷,他也沒再做過什麽令人討厭的事情,就也沒那麽厭惡了。8964 copyright protection494PENANAyOSP5rHQdL 維尼
果然時間就是能夠淡化一切 😮💨8964 copyright protection494PENANAVECB4GsSlF 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANABGVoCAXoN8
8964 copyright protection494PENANAqbr3podjsB 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAoSuYtUgnsd
8964 copyright protection494PENANARYg8HwFoxr 維尼
4)第四章印象深刻的就是後面的大戰,到現在都還記得宙斯威風凜凜登場的瞬間,以及雅典娜的神王雷火,精彩度比第三章的大戰上升許多。8964 copyright protection494PENANAEharcVjuRQ 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA8YpdFOSMBo
8964 copyright protection494PENANAjadd8VnAcq 維尼
記得第三章對付四柱神時,是多人混戰,看得我也眼花繚亂。8964 copyright protection494PENANAFMV7oOuD0k 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAbFl4xjEUCs
8964 copyright protection494PENANANS6vB8qxAI 維尼
這次第四章有分出幾個戰場,再個別仔細描述,感覺整齊很多,閲讀起來也比較容易投入,更能感受戰鬥的精彩度。8964 copyright protection494PENANAlmw7VmGHni 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAexBU1bXPB5
8964 copyright protection494PENANAsTsIQ96xqz 維尼
要如何利用缺乏畫面的文字,將多人混戰描述得不凌亂且易讀,感覺是很多人的課題,包括我自己。8964 copyright protection494PENANAP0fdPnBx16 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAdoMQGaAzSe
8964 copyright protection494PENANA8nULvA7XFq 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAf25eekdTc3
8964 copyright protection494PENANA0eAbJiqG8p 維尼
5)劇情節奏沒什麽意見,畢竟每個星期只閲讀最新的一、兩章,節奏有問題也很難察覺,期待一口氣閲讀者的意見。8964 copyright protection494PENANAwuF9ZTyY4M 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAZUhJI3nG5M
8964 copyright protection494PENANAkJ3fHBDFk0 維尼
劇情邏輯?現實都沒邏輯了,我還在小説追求什麽邏輯?🤣8964 copyright protection494PENANAsXokY8hoY3 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA0D4rvMmGMk
8964 copyright protection494PENANAN9LutSKgJs 維尼
精彩程度:8964 copyright protection494PENANA3EGVfmG62W 維尼
就專注於第三章和第四章。8964 copyright protection494PENANAMflzB0VKBF 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANATDdXKKjNAc
8964 copyright protection494PENANAhJQQBGNPV7 維尼
第三章是大戰前的劇情精彩,畢竟阿特蘭提斯是新地圖,很多新奇好看的東東。8964 copyright protection494PENANAgjbIwbBlVj 維尼
相比之下,第四章大戰前的劇情,主要是帶出凱尼絲這個新角色,還有關於海格力斯試煉的劇情,就沒那麽精彩了,畢竟對於凱尼絲感覺普普~8964 copyright protection494PENANAc5ojGCVhh3 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAYB7oYxJwjS
8964 copyright protection494PENANATD6O8xXuFk 維尼
但若論大戰劇情,第四章就比第三章精彩很多,原因除了上面説的,還有就是强大的師傅不在,多了點緊張感。8964 copyright protection494PENANAqBASi2UQeX 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAOyd3F7aJVa
8964 copyright protection494PENANAQ6wuxv4760 維尼
容易入口?8964 copyright protection494PENANAL2ZymmSJmD 維尼
沒問題,能接受百合就容易入口了~8964 copyright protection494PENANAYqq65MCquq 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAurxDXB9V1v
8964 copyright protection494PENANALgPF6GZXwI 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAK3OBPZy8Kd
8964 copyright protection494PENANA8R80mM9Ycm 維尼
6)行文用字:8964 copyright protection494PENANA26NbjWCmvJ 維尼
還好,就有時句子會過長,讀起來喘不過氣:8964 copyright protection494PENANAVZ6TNxF1Kt 維尼
8964 copyright protection494PENANAjoMdzSZ74K 維尼
這個傾向較常出現在每章節的開頭,可以考慮多用點逗號?8964 copyright protection494PENANA3OPc7EBwIc 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA3a7EVDDwI8
8964 copyright protection494PENANAC5GZPutRY3 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAo3r4lCHXQM
8964 copyright protection494PENANApWV0GTAkeS 維尼
7)優點:8964 copyright protection494PENANAYrO4euhiCR 維尼
百合花香大好!😚8964 copyright protection494PENANAB9e1um0pIn 維尼
希臘神話融合其他神話的世界觀大好!😚8964 copyright protection494PENANAEM5IpuYjiY 維尼
戰鬥大好!😚8964 copyright protection494PENANAcvaFOiYqKs 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA1IDvfvRJTR
8964 copyright protection494PENANAqPDAMoZv5X 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAQ8kz1GxQDv
8964 copyright protection494PENANAQj0YHLZ3z6 維尼
8)改善的地方:8964 copyright protection494PENANAor0U9RmjmY 維尼
好像上面所説的,段落開頭句子過長。8964 copyright protection494PENANAKuiJFdkCqm 維尼
多人混戰要注意。8964 copyright protection494PENANAZkxNjgTFMN 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA0N4jDCH8MI
8964 copyright protection494PENANAyVuwZR2eDC 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAHHjXgyIBt4
8964 copyright protection494PENANAzZXsGSzCnp 維尼
9)期望:8964 copyright protection494PENANATuQZoV2upG 維尼
期待看到雅典娜推翻宙斯。😏8964 copyright protection494PENANAmswWqOvjc0 維尼
或是……更强大的敵人出現。8964 copyright protection494PENANABz4rB8ykdc 維尼
還有姆大陸會出現嗎?👀8964 copyright protection494PENANAe3kVCmm7IC 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANA4oCuOPAp7k
8964 copyright protection494PENANACDMCsbnrX4 維尼
498Please respect copyright.PENANAQ2hRUaruP0
8964 copyright protection494PENANAMCgCLriX89 維尼
10)8964 copyright protection494PENANADIWQv4alab 維尼
宣傳時間:8964 copyright protection494PENANAhps27Cy7EE 維尼
喜歡香香女角或打打打的各位,歡迎來看看😚:8964 copyright protection494PENANAClnTgLbUyH 維尼
連結:https://www.penana.com/article/6712298964 copyright protection494PENANAPVXCT1IeDo 維尼
216.73.216.190
ns216.73.216.190da2