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上次寫心得時的閱讀進度,差不多是第三章的一半,所以有些地方可能沒什麽改變。😅8964 copyright protection399PENANAdRV1MUQBXh 維尼
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1)一至四章完讀。8964 copyright protection399PENANAgfuSP7Y60Z 維尼
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2)男角色方面,第四章出現了海格力斯,但表現并沒什麽活躍,幾乎被凱尼絲淹沒,所以還是俄里翁。8964 copyright protection399PENANAQGIqLC595P 維尼
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女角色方面,尼刻在第四章有很多表現,反超美杜莎和潘多拉,是目前最喜歡的女角色。😚8964 copyright protection399PENANA58Jln8UjzU 維尼
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凱尼絲就……可能因爲多了根,很難歸類為男或女,感覺也普普,多了根也還是不夠有特色。8964 copyright protection399PENANAOg1ppTMwzq 維尼
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3)討厭的角色還真的沒有,就連以前討厭的戰神阿瑞斯,感覺時過境遷,他也沒再做過什麽令人討厭的事情,就也沒那麽厭惡了。8964 copyright protection399PENANA2xg4srgRpu 維尼
果然時間就是能夠淡化一切 😮💨8964 copyright protection399PENANA84BKANamXF 維尼
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4)第四章印象深刻的就是後面的大戰,到現在都還記得宙斯威風凜凜登場的瞬間,以及雅典娜的神王雷火,精彩度比第三章的大戰上升許多。8964 copyright protection399PENANAzEOte0ncPB 維尼
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記得第三章對付四柱神時,是多人混戰,看得我也眼花繚亂。8964 copyright protection399PENANA7MX99qC5bY 維尼
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這次第四章有分出幾個戰場,再個別仔細描述,感覺整齊很多,閲讀起來也比較容易投入,更能感受戰鬥的精彩度。8964 copyright protection399PENANAFbGcwqeQhI 維尼
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要如何利用缺乏畫面的文字,將多人混戰描述得不凌亂且易讀,感覺是很多人的課題,包括我自己。8964 copyright protection399PENANAlmy50TPDa2 維尼
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5)劇情節奏沒什麽意見,畢竟每個星期只閲讀最新的一、兩章,節奏有問題也很難察覺,期待一口氣閲讀者的意見。8964 copyright protection399PENANAJwKW2lySH4 維尼
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劇情邏輯?現實都沒邏輯了,我還在小説追求什麽邏輯?🤣8964 copyright protection399PENANAYvSPNWxJkP 維尼
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精彩程度:8964 copyright protection399PENANAOzyyHPyLIg 維尼
就專注於第三章和第四章。8964 copyright protection399PENANAgO0KniI6gR 維尼
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第三章是大戰前的劇情精彩,畢竟阿特蘭提斯是新地圖,很多新奇好看的東東。8964 copyright protection399PENANAI3v0VuWYAL 維尼
相比之下,第四章大戰前的劇情,主要是帶出凱尼絲這個新角色,還有關於海格力斯試煉的劇情,就沒那麽精彩了,畢竟對於凱尼絲感覺普普~8964 copyright protection399PENANAoZkqvhFjF3 維尼
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但若論大戰劇情,第四章就比第三章精彩很多,原因除了上面説的,還有就是强大的師傅不在,多了點緊張感。8964 copyright protection399PENANADdH99p6tLu 維尼
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容易入口?8964 copyright protection399PENANAC22P9KUoaV 維尼
沒問題,能接受百合就容易入口了~8964 copyright protection399PENANAksq3PEKPJN 維尼
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6)行文用字:8964 copyright protection399PENANASZcDEVwRKQ 維尼
還好,就有時句子會過長,讀起來喘不過氣:8964 copyright protection399PENANAM0YgXwosCW 維尼
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這個傾向較常出現在每章節的開頭,可以考慮多用點逗號?8964 copyright protection399PENANAsy3oRbC66j 維尼
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7)優點:8964 copyright protection399PENANAvvjivEBnBQ 維尼
百合花香大好!😚8964 copyright protection399PENANAnc9EIZmVKZ 維尼
希臘神話融合其他神話的世界觀大好!😚8964 copyright protection399PENANAp3kKTiB6Wv 維尼
戰鬥大好!😚8964 copyright protection399PENANAYgewiASO3J 維尼
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8)改善的地方:8964 copyright protection399PENANAwvDcFxO4yk 維尼
好像上面所説的,段落開頭句子過長。8964 copyright protection399PENANACO7nbka7mC 維尼
多人混戰要注意。8964 copyright protection399PENANAxmiyRnFaQ2 維尼
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9)期望:8964 copyright protection399PENANA3QL0GmntrZ 維尼
期待看到雅典娜推翻宙斯。😏8964 copyright protection399PENANA9gy1o09f9k 維尼
或是……更强大的敵人出現。8964 copyright protection399PENANA9HYEx7lY6N 維尼
還有姆大陸會出現嗎?👀8964 copyright protection399PENANA1TymqOibdy 維尼
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喜歡香香女角或打打打的各位,歡迎來看看😚:8964 copyright protection399PENANAOocfKlFCo5 維尼
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