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你的作品沒人看嗎？我來看！
ENTRY #6
Author: 雪貂之主
Published:
Apr 5, 2023
你的作品沒人看嗎？我來看！
Published:
Apr 5, 2023
ENTRY #6
求點評 - 《薄暮不再》
Author: 雪貂之主
Published:
Apr 5, 2023
1 Min Read
163 Words
No Plagiarism!26xexHnReDpOOFtNm1hmposted on PＥNAＮＡ

作品鏈結：薄暮不再

這篇架空日本的犯罪題材小說，目前尚在連載中（如果連載作品不受理的話就抱歉打擾了）。

已經寫作了一段時間，但是一直以來都沒收到過評價，所以希望大大可以幫評文，歡迎簡單的心得感想，也可以說說小說有哪些地方會讓人想棄坑，哪些地方不吸引/有改進空間，讓我知道未來可以如何改進自己的作品。（最後希望大大評文時可以說一個優點，讓我心靈平衡一下。）

可公開評文。

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