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你的作品沒人看嗎？我來看！
ENTRY #4
Author: 夏酒
Published:
Apr 4, 2023
你的作品沒人看嗎？我來看！
Published:
Apr 4, 2023
ENTRY #4
《墨染殘陽》 少懷篇  卷一
Author: 夏酒
Published:
Apr 4, 2023
1 Min Read
198 Words
No Plagiarism!HSCWEgsiEv0O2YMedLdNposted on PＥNAＮＡ

不管有或沒有，都先感謝大大!

個人習慣總是寫了又刪，刪了又寫，現在有點審美疲勞了。

這本的後五章，我自己覺得發揮得算不錯，但前面我寫得很吃力，修了三次才終於定好，因為後幾章沒什麼人看，所以我一直無法判斷到底有沒有更好，還是更差。

由於我還是學生，一忙起來，作品的連載總是會斷斷續續，超容易被讀者遺忘的。

如果符合大大評文標準的話，我有一個小小要求

我要狠評!超狠的那種，我不會玻璃心的!大大放心。

最在意的是節奏，我經常被這東西弄到自我懷疑。

https://www.penana.com/article/815819103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIv2czSy8vp

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