
你好,我是個寫作新手,筆齡剛好半年了。筆下的故事只有一個,還要是個大長篇的西方玄幻。230Please respect copyright.PENANAUjnjNbtyMN
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聽說讀者們一般會看前三章來決定是否看下去,自從得知這個說法之後我在意得很,所以寫了近十五萬字才決定把劣作《千瘡百孔》砍掉重練。230Please respect copyright.PENANA3YHuGy3LhJ
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花了近兩個月的時間,不停摸索怎樣用六、七千字來留住讀者,所以那時我向公司請一星期假期就是為了這個。將近假期結束之時,我捉了個會看文章的朋友,迫他看我寫那近一萬的字。230Please respect copyright.PENANARkb07vsCgp
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結果我又砍掉重練了!230Please respect copyright.PENANACBMjiQ0JoB
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一星期的假期呀!我笑了。那之後真的發瘋了那樣,上班偷偷寫作,下班全力投入字海。又一星期過去了,我拿著全新的七千字又迫他看了。230Please respect copyright.PENANAJ8b0phtR5J
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終於嘛,算是可以用了。那之後的日子不停重修前五章的內容與造句。改了多少次?沒再數了。反正期間找了很多人幫忙校閱,感謝他們!《千瘡百孔 修訂版》經歷過兩個月的洗刷終於出來了!230Please respect copyright.PENANAtIEEi6UO8U
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話太多了吧?該回來拜託閣下了!230Please respect copyright.PENANARAGfTwYK2r
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先說一下,我不是想得到閣下的肯定,我希望有一個嚴厲的書評。讓我知道自己的不足,使我從中改善,直至能已作者身份自居而不愧。230Please respect copyright.PENANAbdJMEtHS57
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修訂版只是一個名字,這不等如最終版。意味著我一定會回到起點又重新改過一遍,什麼精進版、完善版、決定版、最終版乃至最終決定版,這些名字我也想好了,所以望閣下嚴厲地品評一下《千瘡百孔 修訂版》吧!230Please respect copyright.PENANAe9f0Uhxjof
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感謝萬分!230Please respect copyright.PENANAl5D6uCNx6d
左中道字230Please respect copyright.PENANAULJ8m9Ouwv