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會痛的鋼琴
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【寫作練習:會痛的鋼琴】
高詩佳老師的書《閱讀寫作小學堂》的練習
主題與矛盾有關,原本題目應為飛天猴,我擅自改成其他題目
這篇文章算是自己的懺悔文,但也是一篇短文,也寫到哭......
如果有人看過《葬樂園》其中一個事件就在裡頭,只是沒有寫在小說裡
學習單:利用四個段落寫下一篇短文
思考:
開始:鋼琴覺得哪裡痛?走音了覺得痛嗎?主人敲琴鍵敲得太大力覺得痛嗎?沒有做保養,零件出問題,所以痛嗎?
發展:鋼琴沒有知覺,為什麼它會覺得痛?鋼琴是發生了甚麼事嗎?
高潮:痛了,它會有甚麼表現?
結果:鋼琴最後的下場是甚麼?
Total Reading Time: 5 minutes
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