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倚聲part2
ENTRY #6
Author: 倪語
Published:
Sep 23, 2016
倚聲part2
Published:
Sep 23, 2016
ENTRY #6
醜奴兒-思君
Author: 倪語
Published:
Sep 23, 2016
1 Min Read
161 Words
No Plagiarism!VxCY0dxF3d1lWuahODxlposted on PＥNAＮＡ

三年未見思君苦，濺血啼紅。濺血啼紅，鵑鳥初啼喚暖風。

攀條折一梅花嗅，雲霧迷濛。雲霧迷濛，枯葉紛飛嘆晚冬。

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這是小可第一次寫詞，小可知道自己寫得很爛...（抹臉

然後題目其實不知怎麼取...（跪下

大家都好厲害，寫得超棒！小可想了好幾天才寫出來...（趴倒

「濺血啼紅」是在上國文課時，老師講了一個跟杜鵑鳥有關的故事，帶給小可靈感。

故事網址→http://mypaper.m.pchome.com.tw/ytjiang/post/1323072409

9/25更新：修改了一些不符合平仄的詞。

216.73.216.72

ns216.73.216.72da2
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