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有的沒的
ISSUE #28
Author: 凌曉潔
有的沒的
Author: 凌曉潔
ISSUE #28
我參加過的創挑：《解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言》
No Plagiarism!PQsWqXxI5KLjVyqVy8gAposted on PＥNAＮＡ

連結：孤芳

【古詩解構】晉  陶淵明《飲酒  其五》

【原作】「採菊東籬下，悠然見南山」

【解構】

曾經    你採擷我

在南山下    東籬旁

並將我的高雅與神韻    一一的收藏

當時    無人能知你情操    無人真解你志向

只有我    堅定地守在你身旁

而你臨終前    囑我延續你的精神

我也不曾遺忘

然而    是幾千年了啊

歲月悠悠流逝

我仍傲然挺立

卻再也覓不著舊時的痕跡

只能在九月霜飛的日子裡

遙念你我

初次的相遇

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Last updated: Jul 16, 2026
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