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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection124PENANAE5bmVnVW3Q 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection124PENANAcgo5dhkrsc 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection124PENANADtvNOQgXBp 維尼
迷信著美8964 copyright protection124PENANAKNfS1rUt6Y 維尼
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想起愛情8964 copyright protection124PENANAeRu0qzebUi 維尼
最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection124PENANAeIrPegYiMq 維尼
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我的卻拒絕遠行,我願在此8964 copyright protection124PENANAGbgfRfPfkj 維尼
伴每一朵蓮8964 copyright protection124PENANAZkhzpk7eTy 維尼
守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection124PENANArId7hXj5j9 維尼
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是以東方甚遠,東方甚近8964 copyright protection124PENANA1p7QWeuBj2 維尼
心中有神8964 copyright protection124PENANA0Z1aohVVnJ 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection124PENANAhV6E55ezku 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection124PENANAiXVQJO8fB4 維尼
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我在其側,我在其間,我是蜻蜓8964 copyright protection124PENANA5iRlC83QGq 維尼
風中有塵8964 copyright protection124PENANApOSYllTy3z 維尼
有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection124PENANAjlOosVoj8H 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection124PENANA0108rSPnOs 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection124PENANASRr9lecvM9 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection124PENANAfcpfcmGQSK 維尼
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在星月之下獨自思吟。8964 copyright protection124PENANA3KKCqQv2tp 維尼
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可觀賞的是本體8964 copyright protection124PENANAzXAMT5vbxO 維尼
可傳誦的是芬美 一朵青蓮8964 copyright protection124PENANAi4n9o3ksxG 維尼
有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection124PENANASneLdJDxsK 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection124PENANAXVmJfgKYiu 維尼
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一朵靜觀天宇而不事喧嚷的蓮。8964 copyright protection124PENANAY9rKtySxa4 維尼
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紫色向晚 向夕陽的長窗8964 copyright protection124PENANABn30fQirKC 維尼
儘管荷蓋上承滿了水珠 但你從不哭泣8964 copyright protection124PENANA3qlirfmxel 維尼
仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection124PENANAey6tcuhq1X 維尼
從澹澹的寒波 擎起。8964 copyright protection124PENANA64YA0e9pw0 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection124PENANAESjPnXqDLt 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection124PENANA6dpdK1fhcJ 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection124PENANABzqmYugZku 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection124PENANAF82EP4qaxd 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection124PENANAeF2YIffSit 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection124PENANAGwNnuOwmc5 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection124PENANAidzqvgfflp 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection124PENANAxEHMZ0wGDW 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection124PENANAFYsVbnXYxv 維尼
屬於自己的體香8964 copyright protection124PENANAX1BfPzqE6R 維尼
然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection124PENANAhplR2MYyEA 維尼
難想像8964 copyright protection124PENANAjQXQl4V3uA 維尼
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Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection124PENANA6auj5cjvol 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection124PENANAzxOGP66Dxb 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection124PENANAGyNGPZhu5o 維尼
正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection124PENANAwjsTlXZdxv 維尼
空蕩蕩8964 copyright protection124PENANAN9PqcuqeTu 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection124PENANAiQVgYTJ24Y 維尼
聖良且有光,汲汲營造8964 copyright protection124PENANAi6sYrimYtg 維尼
屬於自己的形象8964 copyright protection124PENANAg6bo1KV4hq 維尼
手指以筆畫蓮花8964 copyright protection124PENANAUTN1p8Pfzy 維尼
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嗯嗯8964 copyright protection124PENANASnNzsrRqZI 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection124PENANAqBm9Cry9Cc 維尼
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大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection124PENANA4uOpPcBUch 維尼
冠冕堂皇8964 copyright protection124PENANAqC7eVbYNG1 維尼
結不了蓮8964 copyright protection124PENANAps0VgTqDAX 維尼
子8964 copyright protection124PENANAxq6qGd9yI5 維尼
的8964 copyright protection124PENANAdQMy01GCTb 維尼
塑8964 copyright protection124PENANAPNmLjDids4 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection124PENANASb9BfcqFW4 維尼
王8964 copyright protection124PENANA51H8nGT4xK 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection124PENANAJiTgIvL0r3 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection124PENANAeCL5RnDnsb 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection124PENANAd0ush9MJLU 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection124PENANAdJScDcKgjP 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection124PENANAbozt81snew 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection124PENANAfPVs7gKMbl 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection124PENANAHZnMPJfCrd 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection124PENANAoQfISrwSvM 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection124PENANA3bTN58AZfQ 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection124PENANAU2QT9aWn3M 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection124PENANAE1t4yn1W1H 維尼
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