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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection123PENANAZ6oDY54w1a 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection123PENANAVrH5JHELzF 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection123PENANAVWyfQhtDlH 維尼
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想起愛情8964 copyright protection123PENANA2GIeJ4OGSX 維尼
最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection123PENANAeyJGzUgMHt 維尼
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守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection123PENANAAoig6dzjgF 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection123PENANA3VWkze2Skx 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection123PENANAy8dDnXST0B 維尼
美在其中,神在其上8964 copyright protection123PENANAXG8jQDvuba 維尼
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有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection123PENANA65b2LYxQv6 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection123PENANAgie26mDIhI 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection123PENANAYMpkVtTgSo 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection123PENANA37Rav28vfJ 維尼
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在星月之下獨自思吟。8964 copyright protection123PENANA0la3X9A2Ky 維尼
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有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection123PENANAjVKJ1fOy46 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection123PENANAbBKi8wrSn7 維尼
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一朵靜觀天宇而不事喧嚷的蓮。8964 copyright protection123PENANAqIPDnklqBD 維尼
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儘管荷蓋上承滿了水珠 但你從不哭泣8964 copyright protection123PENANAM9xQr7ZEys 維尼
仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection123PENANAFuuEM0Jp8k 維尼
從澹澹的寒波 擎起。8964 copyright protection123PENANA8JKiaFKJA8 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection123PENANA4OshoExoeK 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection123PENANAhZejYyDV0y 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection123PENANATpm9I71O63 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection123PENANA7i9Hula9ZN 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection123PENANAvrhUP6Jd6N 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection123PENANANHehz2jfaC 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection123PENANAmbQKrxABIy 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection123PENANAUOrZEPOwys 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection123PENANAxZqx2nBegi 維尼
屬於自己的體香8964 copyright protection123PENANAALu4g75dOw 維尼
然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection123PENANAENt7tRx30x 維尼
難想像8964 copyright protection123PENANAoxtxqLrYml 維尼
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Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection123PENANAvrn1UuyedR 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection123PENANALzppRg6ZsY 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection123PENANAjnGGZD3Ym0 維尼
正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection123PENANAKEPBJyZrFe 維尼
空蕩蕩8964 copyright protection123PENANAK9uCAUVAqV 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection123PENANAhLj5ioMpre 維尼
聖良且有光,汲汲營造8964 copyright protection123PENANA6Clh0ndEaq 維尼
屬於自己的形象8964 copyright protection123PENANAYFxfWHEcbO 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection123PENANAOa7mZI42M2 維尼
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大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection123PENANAjSk3htjSTC 維尼
冠冕堂皇8964 copyright protection123PENANAn813syLd3n 維尼
結不了蓮8964 copyright protection123PENANA5tVk1TmqQh 維尼
子8964 copyright protection123PENANAF2mRytZnra 維尼
的8964 copyright protection123PENANACs1kLZPl8m 維尼
塑8964 copyright protection123PENANACVVZuwUKBv 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection123PENANAW3z37xqRxv 維尼
王8964 copyright protection123PENANAPPwNlhXLSo 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection123PENANAqX9XxzeSvD 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection123PENANAH0AoBnmERu 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection123PENANAVR6wkmA4fA 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection123PENANA7OEO59GT4O 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection123PENANA84AkJRQ2qd 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection123PENANAvYr1Yrg8gk 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection123PENANAepTOE7F462 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection123PENANAnztv50vv3Z 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection123PENANAZYKuOqXAgT 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection123PENANA5gnpRWTwpx 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection123PENANAocZV33fbp5 維尼
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