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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection125PENANArSJt0JxPQz 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection125PENANARBc3rwi2gr 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection125PENANA9hvS4yexjm 維尼
迷信著美8964 copyright protection125PENANAiH3cTKjDgS 維尼
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想起愛情8964 copyright protection125PENANAaqrzEklY7l 維尼
最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection125PENANAtINQUYGZpY 維尼
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伴每一朵蓮8964 copyright protection125PENANAYOsY920ACU 維尼
守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection125PENANAwu4uuqnXbB 維尼
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心中有神8964 copyright protection125PENANA2iIBHNfek6 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection125PENANA0O2N6kq6AR 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection125PENANAkpuorBI7bX 維尼
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有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection125PENANAEGngbRWEbF 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection125PENANAec82MvIJ3E 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection125PENANAhbwQzWcW54 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection125PENANAf5UNfEDhoW 維尼
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可傳誦的是芬美 一朵青蓮8964 copyright protection125PENANACutBG8ZhaD 維尼
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越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection125PENANACN4drHeF0e 維尼
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一朵靜觀天宇而不事喧嚷的蓮。8964 copyright protection125PENANApE8qk6PKTK 維尼
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儘管荷蓋上承滿了水珠 但你從不哭泣8964 copyright protection125PENANA6OJt4SEBUv 維尼
仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection125PENANArR5t2FngMX 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection125PENANACCNRsbmCUy 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection125PENANA02SYKnBiO0 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection125PENANAQOHBV39u4I 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection125PENANAOS9gNVmtW6 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection125PENANASonCHXvbRQ 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection125PENANA87QpfgptCg 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection125PENANA9Xu630kRYC 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection125PENANA7Hm967Av27 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection125PENANAm9XOh8eFcy 維尼
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然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection125PENANAndd9xesqT9 維尼
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Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection125PENANAtEc7Uk6zJb 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection125PENANAPAGkSzS3Pq 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection125PENANACogCe3e4Bb 維尼
正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection125PENANALXa0vpxqs0 維尼
空蕩蕩8964 copyright protection125PENANALBEScyA3Mx 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection125PENANAwHAlC75hrV 維尼
聖良且有光,汲汲營造8964 copyright protection125PENANAsJaJujxVRG 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection125PENANAqHmS8lK7D5 維尼
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大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection125PENANAX4FEa19bL1 維尼
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結不了蓮8964 copyright protection125PENANA5rq58VZF8f 維尼
子8964 copyright protection125PENANA0c3eYzjlPg 維尼
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塑8964 copyright protection125PENANAQjoQjd8mer 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection125PENANAhPs85wsIID 維尼
王8964 copyright protection125PENANAZn8hd0F7kw 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection125PENANAfNXQOxWrA9 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection125PENANAdOPEHILGAK 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection125PENANA6j8YoOItFG 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection125PENANAwoxnBTz9r0 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection125PENANA0ZwhVfoLFk 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection125PENANAsw6DuIuVLY 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection125PENANAldjB1jV47T 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection125PENANAXGrT5MpIhC 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection125PENANARWG2ZuPFZx 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection125PENANAcddojYqXSD 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection125PENANAoCwKwNLZdM 維尼
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【我寫的〈蓮花〉原詩出處】8964 copyright protection125PENANAYotiDAjFck 維尼
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