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W. H. 新詩集
ISSUE #103
Author: W.H.
W. H. 新詩集
Author: W.H.
ISSUE #103
唱和兩首 (漢俳)
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【原詩出處】

＃10：https://reurl.cc/xlrbQZ

＃11：https://reurl.cc/Y8A5X0

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〈唱和 1：呼應＃10、＃11〉by  W.H.

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廟寺無厝蓋

天叫雷公莫等待

一掌劈落來

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(厝蓋＝屋頂)

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〈唱和 2：呼應＃11〉by  W.H.

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棉被是座山

兩人攜手同揮汗

天在遠處看

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漢俳：「五、七、五」的句式，韻腳可押可不押，不像日本俳句要求放「季語」(和季節有關的語句)，感覺較為寬鬆。

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【關於漢俳】

https://toyboy17.pixnet.net/blog/post/56751452

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關於「唱和詩」

https://baike.baidu.com/item/%E5%94%90%E4%BB%A3%E5%94%B1%E5%92%8C%E8%AF%97%E7%A0%94%E7%A9%B6/16996896

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嚴格來說，「唱和詩」應該跟原詩的形式相同，不過此創挑沒那麼嚴格(啊就我開的～)，就來玩玩囉。

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Last updated: May 1, 2025
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